第四章 原创试题 Unit 1 Writing 1 2.pptx

第四章 原创试题Unit 1 Writing 1 Writing 2Every second brings a fresh beginning, every hour holds a new promise, every night dreams can bring hope, and every day is what we choose to make it.基础训练WRITING 1 假定你在暑假时到北京旅行，请你以“My Visit to Beijing”为题，给校刊英语角投稿，内容包括： 1. 总体评价； 2. 介绍吃、住、玩的情况； 3. 你的感受。注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My Visit to Beijing_________________________________________________________________________________________思 路 点 拨审 题 分 析 通过审题我们可知，这是一篇游记，以记叙文的形式讲述旅行的过程和感受。首先，第一段可以先总述到北京旅行这件事，同时附带描述一下对这趟旅行的感受或评价。第二段从吃、住、行、玩等方面分别描述旅行过程。这一段可以发挥的地方比较多，但要注意词数要求，详略得当。最后一段，谈一谈自己的整体感受，并总体评价这次旅行。标准范文及评析My Visit to Beijing ①This summer, I paid a visit to Beijing, which is really an unforgettable journey. ②Instead of staying in a hotel, I stayed with my uncle who lives in Beijing. My uncle took me to many places of interest in his own car. We visited the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Temple of Heaven and many other famous places.We also watched the flag-raising ceremony at Tian’anmen square. Of course, I also tried many special snacks. ③Every place left a deep impression on me and I felt the greatness of our people and country.①一句话将时间、地点、人物、事件以及感受都交 代清楚了，给读者一个很清晰的引导，下面再详 细讲述这次旅行。②第二段介绍吃、玩、住、行的情况。细节比较多， 每个细节没有赘述，而是直接陈述事实，在哪儿 住的，怎么游玩的，游玩了哪些地方，吃了什么， 等等。③短语“left a deep impression”和“felt the greatness”表达了作者最核心的感受与评价，与开头的“an unforgettable journey”相呼应。亮 点 词 句重要词汇1. pay a visit to… 对……参观，访问 2. unforgettable 难以忘怀的3. instead of 代替，而不是 4. places of interest 名胜古迹5. special snacks 特色小吃 6. leave a deep impression on sb. 给某人留下深深的印象高级句型1. This summer, I paid a visit to Beijing, which is really an unforgettable journey.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 今年夏天，我去北京旅行了，这真是一次令人难忘的旅行。 2. Instead of staying in a hotel, I stayed with my uncle who lives in Beijing.（who引导的限制性定语从句） 我没有住旅馆，而是和居住在北京的叔叔住在一起。基础训练WRITING 2 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Mom, is it okay if I invite a few mids for Thanksgiving?” asked my son Evan. “Mids” or midshipmen, are what Naval Academy students are called. Evan