《书面表达》专题练习-完整版PPT课件.ppt

英语书面表达训练 看到以下图片你能想到哪些东西呢?请尽可能多的说出图片中的信息。 get up 6:30 AM It’s six thirty in the morning. He is getting up. six thirty in the morning go to school 7:30 AM It’s seven thirty in the morning. They are going to school. seven thirty in the morning play basketball 4:00 PM It’s four o’clock in the afternoon. He is playing basketball. four o’clock in the afternoon sing 5:00PM It’s five o’clock in the afternoon. She is singing. five o’clock in the afternoon read a book 6:20 PM It’s six twenty in the evening. She is reading a book. six twenty in the evening 9:30 PM sleep It’s nine thirty in the evening. She is sleeping. nine thirty in the evening 8:00 PM brother play computer games mother clean father run talk on the phone sister do homework grandparents watch TV It’s eight o’clock in the evening .My brother is playing computer games .My mother is cleaning .My father is running. I’m talking on the phone. My sister is doing her homework. My grandparents are watching TV. What a busy night! A busy night 怎样写好图片类短文呢？ 单幅图。 多幅图。多幅图可能是按顺序排列，也有可能是先排列、再写作。 单幅画 多幅画 准备工作： 1 仔细审题，明确要求。 ① 罗列信息，认真分析，审清题意。 ② 列出要点（人物，时间，事件，地点等的单词，短语）。 ③ 注意动词的运用（确定好时态，语态）。 2 紧扣要点，寻求思路。 ①草拟提纲，确定开头。 ②把刚才列出的单词和短语扩展成句子。 ③拟好结尾，可适当发表自己观点。 写作中： 1 开门见山，紧扣主题。 如介绍自己笔友：I have a pen pal. 介绍自己的一天：I have a busy day. 2 语言正确，规范地道,避免使用中文式英语。 如：I very much love you. 3 标点符号规范，正确。 4 重短轻长，就易避难。以写正确，通顺为最基本要求。 5 过渡自然，表达流畅。 ①学会正确使用连词，保持行文流畅。 ②注意不重复使用可置换的词。 6 适当评论，发表己见。 如：How beautiful a day! How friendly they are! We have a good time today. 成文以后： 1 一般语法项目的检查。 人称:Lucy is my sister. He is 12 years old .( She) 时态:They go to the movies now.( are going) 主谓一致:Tom work with people and money. (works) 习惯用法:She wants go to the park. (wants to go) 2 注意语序。（中文和英文