运用五种高级句型及结构对写作进行润色.pptxVIP

运用五种高级句型及结构对写作进行润色 Ⅰ. 常见的不足1 汉语式英语 2 无过渡语 3 句式单一,平铺直叙 Ⅱ. 高考作文评分标准：1.覆盖所有内容要点；2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；3.在使用复杂结构或高级词汇时允许有些许错误4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑 Ⅲ. 如何增强书面表达效果，为高考作文增分1. 使用较高级的词汇2. 使用恰当的连接词3. 使用较丰富的句式 学习目标：1.学生能判断长句中所使用的语法现象2.学生能运用 A. It’s adj. for sb to do sth句型， B. not only…but also …表并列结构 C. 倒装句， D. 强调句 E. 定语从句等句型进行句子的改写。3.学生能运用上述句型结构对篇章的简单句，零散句进行整合润色，为高考作文增分。 Step1.读句子，判断句式 1. It’s important for us students to raise the awareness of saving.It’s adj. for sb to do sth2. It’s the science and technology that drives our society to be a better one.强调句3. A good friend will not only share your joy but also your sorrow.not only… but also… 5. Many students are addicted to playing computer games, which does harm to their eyesight.定语从句4. I recall an unforgettable experience that has ever happened to me.定语从句 7. Only by stopping the factories from pouring the harmful waste can we protect our environment.倒装句8. From my perspective, never can we overlook the great benefit of being thrifty .倒装句 Step 2. Group Discussion 按要求改写句子Rules:1.每小组必须在5分钟内完成讨论2.最快讨论完的小组，派代表马上到黑板把句子抄下来，先到的小组可优先选择自己要做的题号3.句型结构正确的，每个句子得2个“赞”4.对其他组答案进行修改并正确的得3个“赞” 1. A balanced diet is beneficial for us. We should keep a balanced diet. ()It’s beneficial for us to keep a balanced diet.Version1. It’s adj. for sb to do sth 2. Millions of teenagers are attracted by Dr. Du Minjun. They start to be concerned about the Korean culture.Version1 . 定语从句Millions of teenagers who are attracted by Dr. Du Minjun start to be concerned about the Korean culture. 3. Music helps students release stress.Version 1 . 强调句It’s music that helps students release stress. 4. Group activity helps students get along with other classmates. It also encourages students to express themselves.Version 1. not only …but also…Group activity not only helps students get along with other classmates but also encourages students to express themselves. 5. We can form a good study habit only by making up our