2015年6月四级考试答案解析（三）.docxVIP

2015年6月大学英语四级考试真题(三)答案与详解 Part Ⅰ Writing 审题思路 这是一篇四级考试中常见的图画作文。图片中展现的是一个女孩告诉妈妈她考入了妈妈心中理想的学校， 其寓意是揭露现如今的家长为孩子做重大决定的普遍现象。 写作提纲 一、描述图片：描述图片：女孩考人了妈妈心中的理想大学(was accepted to the college of your choice). 二、分析现象：1、家长为孩子做决定的普遍性（It is such a common thing nowadays that parents make a lot of decisions for their children...) 2、诸多原因（a wiser choice, only child, unfulfilled dreams) 三、提出建议：l、年轻人应该自己做决定(make decisions by themselves ) 2、成为自己命运的主人（to be master of their own fate) 范文点评 高分范文 精彩点评 Being Master of Your Own Fate ① As is vividly depicted in the picture, a young girl is telling her mother, “Good news, I was accepted to the college of your choice. ” ② But ironically，the three words “ of your choice ” reveal the truth that the dream which has just come true does not belong to the girl at all. ③ It is such a common thing nowadays that parents make a lot of decisions for their children，even at the major turning points of their life, including choosing colleges and majors, hunting for a job or getting married. ④ Several reasons account for this phenomenon. ⑤ First of all, parents always think that they are able to make a wiser choice than teenagers .⑥ Also，they attach too much attention to their only child in the family.⑦ Whafs more, it seems to be the only way to realize their unfulfilled dreams by letting their children do things that they want them to. ⑧ For teenagers, there is a long way to go in their life. They will finally make decisions by themselves. ⑨ To be master of their own fate is a great step in their growth. ① ②描述图片内容:女孩实现了妈妈的理想。通过ironically—词指出图片的讽刺意味。 ③指出这一现象的普遍性，实现了从图片描述到现象分析的转折。 ④指出有诸多原因导致这一现象。 ⑤⑥⑦一一列举产生该现象的原因。 ⑦⑧⑨对全文进行总结，并向青少年提出倡议：自己做决定，做自己命运的主人。 加分亮点 vividly生动地 ironically 讽刺地 turning points 转折点 phenomenon 现象 unfulfilled未实现的 全文翻译 做自己命运的主人 正如图片中生动描绘的那样，一个女孩正在告诉她的妈妈：“好消息，我被你选择的大学录取了。”但讽刺的是，“你选择的”这几个字揭露了一个事实，那就是这个刚刚被实现的梦想并不属于这个女孩。 现如今的一个普遍现象是父母为孩子做很多决定，甚至在他们人生的重大转折点，包括选择大学和专业、找工作或是结婚。很多原因可以解释这一现象。首先，父母总是认为他们可以比孩子做出更明智的决定。而且，对于家里的独生子女，父