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Simon’s IELTS Writing Task 1 Question types Numbers Numbers Describe Compare Changes/trends Line graph Bar chart Pie chart Table Diagram-comparing Diagram-process Essay structure (4 paragraphs ) Introduction One sentence : Paraphrase the question Overview 2 sentences :The main , general things Details Details 3+4: Why 2 paragraphs ? This makes you organize or ‘group’ the information better (or put the overview at the end) No conclusion!! Line graph ( Line graph show numbers changing over a period of time ) You will not see a graph with only one line . You will almost definitely see 2/3/4/5 lines. Your job is to compare the lines , not describe them separately. Frist , make a very general comparison .( Summary / overview paragraph ) Second , compare the lines at specific point . (‘details’ paragraphs ) For example ：4 lines You can’t describe everything Write at least one thing about each line. 你看不到只有一条线的图形。 你会看到2/3/4/5条线。 你要对这些线条进行比较，而不是单独描述它们。 首先，做一个非常一般的比较。（总结/概述段落） 第二，比较这些线条的特定的节点。（‘细节’段落） Paragraph 1 : Introduction The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours ) in France between 1980 and 2012 . 改写：The line graph compares the amount of electricity produced in France using four differdent sources of power over a period of 32 years. 这个折线图比较了法国在32年间使用四种不同电源的发电量。 Paragraph 2 :Overview—2 sentences , 2 main points. It is clear that nuclear power was by far the most important means of electricity generation over the period shown . renewables provided the lowest amount of electricity in each year. 很明显，在所示期间，核能是迄今为止最重要的发电方式，可再生能源每年提供的电力量最低。 Paragraph 3 : Detail — 2 paragraphs , compare the lines In 1980 , thermal power stations were the main source of electricity in France, generating around 120 terawatt hours of power . Nuclear and hydroelectric power stations produced just under 75 terawatt hours of electricity each, and renewables provided a negligible amount . Just one year later , nuclear power overtook thermal power as the primary sourc