高中英语高考应用文写作语料积累（风景描写+动物描写）.doc

PAGE 1 PAGE 0 高考英语应用文写作语料 一、风景描写 （一）风景描写小技巧 1.抓住景物的特征描写； 2.按照一定的顺序描写，层次清晰； 3.合理运用修辞手法，增加描绘的生动性； 4.可融情于景，借景抒情。 （二）写作语料 1.Mingshashan was a beauty.The beauty was enhanced (加强) by the wind that blew the sand, creating different patterns.Also, the sand reflected different colors at different times of the day. 准确地抓住了鸣沙山的特点：沙子会随着风组合成不同的形状、变换颜色。 2.The endless wheat fields looked like the green sea.Flowers along the road smiled at us and the warm wind softly touched our faces. 绿油油的麦田望不到边，像一片绿色的海洋，花儿对我们微笑，暖风轻柔地抚摸着我们的脸颊。句中比喻和拟人修辞的运用，让读者从字里行间感受到春天的勃勃生机。 3.Every spring, when you look down on the area, you can see the farmland covered in golden cole (油菜) flowers stretching (延伸) right to the horizon (地平线), forming a sea of yellow buds (花蕾) and filling the air with the refreshing smell of spring. 农田上方铺满了金灿灿的油菜花，一直延伸至地平线，构成了一片金黄色的花海，空气中弥漫着春天清新的气息。句子描写生动，让读者仿佛身临其境。 4.The setting sun painted the clear sky in bright gold.Seeing this beautiful scene filled me with great warmth and comfort. 借景抒情，美丽的风景让作者感到温暖与安慰。 5.The sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality, and the stars that dotted the sky lit up the night. 深蓝色的天空，星光闪烁，渲染了一种静谧的氛围。 6.When I looked into the distance, the sea seemed to melt into the sky.The scene was just like a beautiful painting, taking my breath away.Stepping into the ocean, the water covered my legs.As the waves came in, it felt just like children running around my legs.When the water was still, it was like a soft blanket covering me. 连用多个比喻句，生动形象地描写了时而宁静时而活泼的大海。 7.As time went on, darkness fell down on us.The waves at night seemed bigger than before.The rising sea was roaring all night, with no sign of stopping. 本句用了拟人的修辞，动词roaring将夜晚波涛汹涌的大海描写得活灵活现。 8.When I was close enough, the rumble (隆隆声) of water turned into a pleasant melody (旋律).The sun hung right above the fall, which was reflecting its blaze (光芒) like a huge strip (带) of diamonds.My soul was certainly touched. 巧用比喻，将流水声比作欢快的旋律，瀑布比作钻石，生动形象，同时也烘托了作者愉悦的心情。 9.As the sun beats down on (炙烤) the