读后续写语篇练习（狮子与奴隶）2024届高三英语写作专项.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习1——狮子与奴隶 题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2 Part 1题目再现3 续写原文Once there was a slave named Androcles, who was so badly treated by his master that he resolved to run away from him. He therefore secretly left his master’s house and hid himself in a forest, some miles distant from the city. After wandering about for some time, he came to a large cave, and overcome by hunger and tiredness, he lay down in it, and soon fell fast asleep.He was suddenly awakened by the roar of a wild beast; a great lion stood right at the mouth of the cave. There was no way he could escape!Androcles expected nothing else than to be at once torn to pieces, but to his great surprise, the lion came gently towards him, without showing any signs of anger. It gave forth a low and mournful（悲哀的）sound, as if it were begging for his assistance. As the lion approached him, he noticed that one of its feet was swollen.4 续写原文He then went up to the lion, took hold of the wounded paw（ 爪 子 ）, and examined it as a surgeon would examine a patient. He was not long in finding out the cause of the swelling; for he saw in the ball of the foot a very large thorn（刺）. The slave pulled out the thorn, and pressed out of the wound a quantity of matter, which gave the lion immediate relief.Then, the lion began to show his gratitude by every means in his power. He jumped about like a playful spaniel （西班牙猎犬）, wagged his great tail, and licked the hands and feet of his physician. From that moment Androcles became his guest; the lion always shared his prey.The slave continued to live like this for several months. At length, wandering carelessly through the woods, he was seized by a company of soldiers who were sent by the master to search for him.5 段首句Para 1: He was sentenced to be torn by a lion in the public arena（竞技场）.Para 2: However, the lion didn’t act as most had imagined.6 Part 2题目分析7 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8 续写建议第一段：隶的恐惧、狮子的咆哮、观众的