读后续写语篇练习（人狼相遇）2024届高三英语写作专项.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习1——人狼相遇 题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2 Part 1题目再现3 续写原文It was a peaceful night. I was sleeping with my brothers, feeling warm and comfortable. Mama was sleeping nearby, covered by snow. Papa was somewhere nearby, watching over us. There was a bright moon and we had all had a good meal of venison (鹿肉) Papa had caught earlier.“Uncle Louis is coming”, Papa said. We loved Uncle Louis. He was a funny wolf, and always had interesting things to tell us and show us.A little while later, Uncle Louis appeared. We did not approach him with respect the way we approached Papa. We flew at him, jumped all over him, and rolled him in the snow. Uncle Louis laughed and patted us with his paws. He is black all over, with yellow eyes, and he is very tall.4 续写原文“Its the longest night of the year”, Uncle Louis said, “Does everyone feel like taking a run through the woods? I want to show you something unusual.”Hearing that, Papa warned that it was dangerous to go near that pack of humans who lived in the woods.“They are hardly dangerous”, Uncle Louis laughed, “They are so clumsy and make so much noise. They are not able to get near us——or even see us if we dont want them to. Besides, this is their special night. They are quite peaceful and wont be bothering about wolves.”“Oh, please, Papa, let us run through the woods with Uncle Louis and see something unusual! “ We all begged.“It is a fine night”, Papa smiled, “I must admit, I do feel like running.”5 段首句Para 1: And we were off, all of us, heading towards the woods.Para 2We stopped and sat on a hillside and below us was the humans’ place.6 Part 2题目分析7 已知短文内容通过阅读所给文章可知，文章记叙了作者是一只小狼，一个宁静的夜晚，Louis叔叔来到了他们家，并提议去树林里跑一跑，有人提醒他们住在树林里的人很危险，Louis叔叔告诉他们人类并不是危险，于是他们往树林走去。8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9 续写建议第一段：第一段开头是：我们所有人都出发了，向树林走去。所以后文应该是讲述他们进入树林后的情况，在爸爸和Louis叔叔的带领下，作者感到强壮和轻松，仿佛可以永远奔跑下去。第二段：我们停了下来，坐在山坡上，下面是人类的地盘。本段应该写他们在山坡上看到的东西，他们听到人类在木屋里唱歌，温暖的光线从洞里照射出来。在这个不寻常的夜