读后续写（亲情篇）2024届高考英语作文备考.pptxVIP

读后续写之亲情篇范文讲解 本次周测续写所存在的问题：1. 时态仍用一般现在时2. 特殊动词过去式变不对：know--knowed? stand--standed?3. 有的句子过长，导致一句话有多个主谓4. 连贯性不强：很多同学忽视续写的两段所给的开头！！！ 比如部分同学在第一段就用finally结束了故事？5. 时间安排不合理，导致未能够完成续写6. 书写：仍有同学使用修正带！字很飘 Jenny was the only child in her family. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding(斥责) from her mother. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand(货摊) for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she gave a sigh and had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?” “Oh, yes, but I dont have money on me,” she replied. “Thats nothing. Ill treat you today,” said the man. “Come in.” The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, the smell so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently. “What is it?” asked the man kindly. “Nothing. Actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Jenny as she wiped her tears. Character: JennyJenny’s mothermiddle-aged seller Jenny was the only child in her family. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding(斥责) from her mother. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand(货摊) for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she gave a sigh and had to leave.Paragraph 1:Approaching the doorway, _____________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.___________________________________________________________________simple past tense Jenny was the only child in h