读后续写动作描写——体现惊恐与犹豫.docxVIP

惊恐1.用身体不自觉后退来表现。在《小王子》中描写主人公恐惧的样子：Even as I was digging into my pocket to get out my revolver I made a running step back.But,at the noise I made,the snake let himself flow easily across the sand like the dying spray of a fountainand,in no apparent hurry, disappeared,with a light metallic sound,among the stones. 词组 dig into my pocket,made a running step back 描述了主人公看到蛇时的惊恐。2.用猛跳着站起来表现再如《小王子》中描述主人公受了惊吓的样子：I jumped to my feet,completely thunderstruck. I blinked my eyes hard.I looked carefullyaround me. And I saw a most extraordinary small person, who stood there examining me with great seriousness. 此处 jumped to my feet, blinked my eyes hard, look carefully all around me表达了主人公惊愕之情。“我”像是受到惊雷轰击一般，一下子站立起来。“我”使劲地揉了揉眼睛，仔细地看了看。“我”看见一个十分奇怪的小家伙严肃地朝“我”凝眸望着。跳着站起来，生动的展现了当时惊愕的样子。 (四)犹豫 1.用站着不说话来表现。 如《哈克贝里费恩历险记》中描写主人公犹豫的样子: At length，every idea seemed to fail him and，after standing a few moments without saying a word, he suddenly recollected himself, and took leave. 通过 seem to fail him,显示出主人公拿不定主意,standing...without saying a word 显示出不知所措，站在那里无话可说，却还是犹豫着要不要走。 2.用一连串的动作表现。 再如《哈利波特》中描写主人公纠结的样子：He dashed back across the road,hurried up to his office，snapped at his secretary not to disturb him,seized his telephone, and had almost finished dialing his home number when he changed his mind.