读后续写动作描写——体现高兴与悲伤.docxVIP

读后续写心理描写——高兴与悲伤 本篇选取了经典文学作品中的动作描写素材，进行分类解读赏析，分析写作手法。 按照动作描写和情绪表达的关系，分八大类型：高兴、悲伤、惊恐、犹豫、无聊、好奇、愤 怒与疲惫。 (一)高兴 1.用跳舞来表现。在《项链》中，就有描述女主人公开心时候的样子： She danced with delight and passion，thinking of nothing，in the achievement of her beauty and in the glory of her success. 2.用一连串动作来表现。在《夏洛的网》中，也有描述开心的场景： He gave a jump in the air，twirled，ran a few steps，stopped，looked all around，sniffed the smells of afternoon，and then set off walking down through the orchard. Pausing in the shade of an apple tree，he put his strong snout into the ground and began pushing, digging，and rooting. He felt very happy. 他先是蹦了一下，原地转了几圈，再跑上几步，又停了下来，四下望了望，嗅了嗅午后暖烘烘的空气，然后一路跑进了果园。他在一颗苹果树的树荫下停住了脚步，将结实的鼻子插入地里，哼哧哼哧地拱起泥土来，真是欢乐得不得了!连续的动词描写能够反映出主人公当时快乐的一系列的反应，让其形象栩栩如生，给读者留下十分深刻的印象。 此外，描述开心的动作表达还有： dance with pleasure， give a jump in the air， twirl，以及其他类似表达，如 be wild with joy (心花怒放)， burst into laughter， burst out laughing (放声大笑)， be in high spirits (兴高采烈)等。 (二)悲伤 1.用声音低沉，流泪来表示悲伤 Later，in the dark，after the movie had started，I heard Hassan next to me,croaking.Tears were sliding down his cheeks.(节选自《追风筝的人》) 在黑暗中，电影开始了，我听到 Hassan 在我旁边低沉而沟哑地说着话，眼泪顺着 他的脸颊滚下来表现出了他的悲伤。 2.用哭泣来表现悲伤。 Dorothy began to sob at this，for she felt lonely among all these strange people. Her tears seemed to grieve the kindhearted Munchkins，for they immediately took out their handkerchiefs and began to weep also. (节选自《绿野仙踪》) sob, her tears seemed to grieve, weep等不同哭泣的词语描述了当时多萝哭泣悲伤的场景。 此外，其他类似悲伤流眼泪的表达还有 tears well up in my eyes， eyes began to water， face was wet with tears，bursting into tears，tears sprang to his eyes，be close to tears，tears flow out of one’s eyes,with tears beginning to flow,with tears in one’s eyes 等。其他表示哭泣的动词还有howl(嚎哭),blur (模糊泪眼)等。