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（2021年长宁区一模） Write at least 60 words about the topic “________left me a new impression.”（请以“________给我留下一个新印象”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）你身边有熟悉的同学、朋友、老师……，有一天可能因为某件事让你对她（他）改变了原有的看法。请补全标题，并结合这个事例谈谈她（他）给你留下的这个新的印象。（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） ________left me a new impression. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： The teacher left me a new impression. Once I?was not interested in English. That?was Miss Wang who changed me. One day, our teacher told us we would have an English speech competition two months later. Everyone was happy?except me, because I couldnt dare to speak English in public. My English teacher came with a?smile and encouraged me. From then on, I practiced every day. The day came, I got the first prize at last. From Miss Wang, I know that if you decide to do something and put your heart into it , you will succeed. The teacher left me a new impression. 【解析】 【分析】 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时首先补全标题，并且根据汉语提示，叙述因为某件事让你对她（他）改变了原有的看法，给你留下了新的印象。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称为主来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时；描述故事时，力求描写细致，故事发生的背景、起因等叙述完整，保证条例清晰。 （二）（2021年奉贤一模） 64. Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据以下情景写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点不占格。） Mr. Smith 用特殊的方式给他的学生上了“精彩一课”。你的老师一定也以他/她独特的方式给你留下过深刻的印象。他/她或许组织过精彩的活动，他/她或许讲述过精彩的故事，他/她或许…… 请以“A wonderful lesson（精彩一课）”为题，记录老师给你上过的精彩一课。 A wonderful lesson _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________