2023年中考英语作文“时间管理”解析及范文.docxVIP

2023年中考英语作文“时间管理”解析及范文 2023年的中考作文偏向“任务型”和“实践性”，不但需要考生 提出“想法”，还要给出“解决办法二 考生首先需要冷静筛选题干信息，找到关键； 动笔前明确篇章结构的分布和切入要点； 否则，很容易洋洋洒洒，偏离写作目标。 原题 假如你是李华(Li Hua),所在社区计划在暑假期间组织一个关于 “时间管理(time management)”的培训活动。请给社区负责人写一 封邮件，内容包含： ①你是否愿意参加，为什么; ②下表是活动方案，针对表格里的一项内容，提出修改意见。 Training Plan 目的 教授时间管理的方法 参与者 (participants) 13?17岁的学生 训练方式(way of training) 阅读 时间 7月每周六上午7： 00-10： 00 地点 社区广场 审题 格式：参照信件开头，Dear Mr. Wang 身份：学生(李华)写给社区负责人 内容和结构：踩点回答①和②，头部用两句话点明①。重点在② 的修改意见一抓住一项内容，通过What+Why的模式深挖5-6句话。 结尾升华。 初步提纲回: 思路 体现 踩点回答① Id love to...because I would be more than happy to...because Time management has always been my problem...so... Im eager to be part of it... As a student facing exams after exams, I... ②的修改意见 时间： I strongly recommend that wc should start the program at 8, because... The training program lasts for three hours, which is... 地点： It will be too hot for students to concentrate There are many seniors working out on the community square. Outdoor activities arc welcome in summer days, but sitting still for hours is sure to draw mosquitos. 结尾： I hope my suggestions arc hclpftil. I wish you a successful training program. （下水文） 版本1 BAN BEN 1 Dear Mr. Wang, As a Grade 9 student, Km eager to sign up for your training program, because I badly need some tips on time management. But I have to get up at around 6:15 for breakfast and preparation. Km afraid that/s way too early. For lack of sleep, we teenagers usually find it challenging to wake up before 7. Besides, there are seniors doing morning exercise at that time on the square. We cant just drive them away, right? Why not start at 5 p.m. to avoid hot day time and call it a day before 6:30 to have dinner? I hope my suggestions are helpful. Yours, Li Hua 版本2 BAN BEN 2 Dear Mr. Wang, What great help your program is! Mum always complains about my poor time management. I dont want to disappoint her any more. So Im definitely in! But isnt it too hot to train us outdoors? And there are annoying mosquitos everywhere. It must be very uncomforta