野外遇险（遇见熊、狼等）读后续写思路及句式整理.docxVIP

优点英语 优点英语 野外遇险读后续写思路及句式资料整理 思路一：野生动物的凶险描写→害怕→自救成功→脱离危险如释重负→ 作者感悟，主题升华 思路二：野生动物的凶险描写→害怕→自救不成功，他救→ 脱离危险如释重负→ 表达感谢→ 作者感悟， 主题升华 1. 野生动物的凶险描写 ①It exposed his sharp teeth, glaring at us as it ran forward. 他露出锋利的牙齿，向前跑时怒视着我们。 ②The bear again stood on his back legs and roared repeatedly. 熊再次用后腿站立，不停地咆哮。 ③It seemed that his mouth was full of blood, his eyes red with anger and the mouth widely open. 他的嘴里似乎满是血，眼睛因愤怒而发红，嘴巴张大了。 2.害怕 ①Seeing this， she felt terror welling up in her heart and surging through her. 当她看到这个时，她感到恐惧涌上心头并且涌向全身。 ②When she saw the beast，so terrified was she that the throat tightened and the knees weakened. 当她看到这只野兽的时候，她是如此害怕以致于喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。 ③Extremely frightened，I found my body was trembling and my palms were sweating. 非常害怕，我发现我身体正在发抖，手心正在冒汗。 3．想办法自救（自救可能成功，自救也可能失败，失败后出现他救） 注：描写自救办法前可以加一个句子 Suddenly, a good idea occurred to/hit/struck sb.突然某人想到一个好主意 (1)呼叫求助法 ①I shouted for help at the top of my voice but in vain. 我声嘶力竭地喊叫求助，但都是徒劳。 (2)引诱法(扔给动物,比如吃的，引起动物的注意) ①（With）Eyes fixed on the beast, he pulled out the sausages in his backpack, aimed at the furry giant and threw it straight to the fierce animal, hoping the flavor would attract it. 他盯着这个野兽，从包里掏出香肠，瞄准毛乎乎的巨（熊），直接扔向这个凶兽，希望香味能够吸引它的注意力。 ②.I picked out some raw meat and threw it to the wolf，hoping the flavor would attract it. 我挑了一些生肉扔给了狼，希望香味能够吸引它的注意力。 (3)直接对抗法：用身边的东西（如文章提到的工具，如stick棍子，gun枪，knife小刀）攻击该动物 ①We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. 我们对着熊大喊大叫，使劲地打罐子，并向空中发射了空猎枪炮弹。 ②I picked my courage and tried to frighten him away with the pepper spray . 我不得不采取行动，所以我鼓起勇气，试图用胡椒喷雾把他吓跑。 ③I took out a metal bar from the car at once and started a fight with the wolf, 我立刻从车里拿出一根金属棒，开始与狼搏斗。 4．自救成功（野生动物享用美食或者被吓到逃跑） ①Satisfied with what he got, the wolf ran into the woods. 狼对所得到的感到满意，跑进了树林。 ②To my great surprise, the bear stopped and bowed down to eat the bread. 令我大为惊讶的是，这只熊停下来弯腰吃面包。 ③The wolf jumped up, and rushed towards one of them, but was beaten back. Seeing that he couldn’t wi