2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写讲解课件(共20张PPT).pptxVIP

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读后续写

Objectives:

1.Tolearntoanalyzethetextandidentifykeyelements,organizationalstructure,plotdevelopment,andlanguagefeatures;

2.Tohaveapreliminaryunderstandingofthewritingrequirementsandproceduresforthecontinuationwriting.

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011.没有使用给出句子，或与所提供各段落开头语衔接不够连贯；2.内容不够丰富；使用少于5个短文中标出的关键词语，或没有标出；3.对话很多，直白的描述很多，对动作、眼神。心理等的细节描写较少。4.语句间欠缺必要的连接成分。5.语法结构和词汇不够丰富，不够准确；6.文章中含有负面的、不合理的因素。Reviewing123456仔细阅读试题要求：1.所续写短文的词数应为150词左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语

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③ThiswasherfirsttimetotraveltoCalifornia.Susanhadalwayswantedtogo,sowhenherfriendAnnamovedtoSanFranciscoandinvitedhertovisit,itwastheperfectopportunity.④Whenitwasannouncedthattheplanewouldsoontakeoff,herexcitementreturned.Inafewhoursshewouldbereunitedwithherfriendandexploringanewcity.⑤Soonaftertakeoff,Susanfellasleep.Itfeltlikeshehadonlybeensleepingashortwhilewhenshefeltataponhershoulderandopenedhereyestoseeaflightattendantstandingnexttoher.⑥“Ma’am?Excuseme?”thewomansaid.“We’reabouttoland.”

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