读后续写遇险类--电梯惊魂讲义--高三英语复习写作专项.docxVIP

阅读下面材料，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一篇完整的故事。

Ifeltsonervous.Itwasthedayofmyinterview.IwokeupearlyjusttomakesureIwouldhavetimetogetprepared.ItfeltlikeanormalMonday,butforme,thisdaywasveryimportant.Therewasalotofpressure.

Aftershowering,IputontheoutfitIhadcarefullychosenandlaidoutthenightbefore.Ilookedatmyreflectioninthemirror.“Youcandothis,”Iencouragedmyself.Iatebreakfastandfedmycat.Imademywaytothebusstopandwaitedpatiently.Asidefromtherapidtappingofmyrightfoot,noonecouldtellthatIwassonervous.

WhenIarrivedatmystop,Iwalkedtotheoffice.ThebuildingwassotallandIfeltsmallinitsshadow.ButIalsofelthopeful.Thiswillbeagreatopportunity,Ithought.Andwhatistheretolose?Lookingdownatmywatch,InoticedthatIwasearly.Thisallowedplentyoftimetoreviewmyresume(简历)andfurtherpreparemyselffortheinterview.

Thedoorsofthebuildingwereimpressive,allsteelandglassandverymodern.

WhenIwalkedin,someoneshowedmethewaitingareaandofferedmeacupofcoffee.Afterafewmoments,amaninanicesuittoldmetojoinhim.Aswewalkedtowardtheelevators,Ibegantofeelanxious.Thepalmsofmyhandsbegantosweat.ItseemedlikeanhourhadpassedbeforeIheardthe“ding”oftheelevatorsopening.

Wegotintotheelevator,fullofmenandwomendressedtothenines（完美地）.

“It’squitealargeoffice,”themansaidtome.Ichucklednervously.Icouldfeelmyselfgettingwarmer.Icouldn’twaittohearthatcomforting“ding”thatsignaledanescape.

Astheelevatorclimbed,Iagainnervouslycheckedmywatch.JustasIlookeddown,ithappened.

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这篇文章有很多情节构思，而主题如何在结尾呈现需要下点功夫。

本文需要围绕两个问题：1.我紧张地去面试，结果如何？2.我被困在电梯里，如何脱困？

主题：既要体现我如何脱困（体现某种品质），又要说明面试结果（让我开心的结果）。

这种结尾以突出开心的结果为主，即：事情办成了。我们可以说是自然结尾。因此有两种方法：

方法一：某人的对话（说明主旨），事情成功了。(例如version1,2)???

方法二：个人感悟，事情办成了。（例如version1,3)

写作中突出的问题是：脱离文章中的问题设计谈主题（譬如有写对待职业的态度，生活中充满信心