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2023年6月3日雅思大作文示范写作

老人缺乏锻炼的原因与解决方法

一、2023年6月3日雅思大作文题目

Doctorsencourageolderpeopletotakeregularexercise,butfew

ofthemtakeenoughphysicalexercise.Whatarethecausesandwhat

canbedonetoencouragethemtotakeexercise?

二、范文及解析

Introduction

Takingregularexercise,asisuniversallyacknowledged,plays

midwifetohelpingoldpeoplekeepphysicalfitness,whilemostof

them,inspiteofstrongrecommendationfromdoctors,stillfailtotake

ampleexercises.Behindsuchaticklishproblem,frommyown

perspective,arethreepredominantfactorsandviablesolutionsarein

desperateneedtoavertthebleakfuture.

解析

本次task2是新考题，但是整体难度并不大，审题注意限定词

olderpeople；

playmidwifetov.促成;帮助；

ticklishadj.不安定的；难对付的；

viableadj.可望成功的，切实可行的；

avertv.防止，避免；

bleakadj.不乐观的；

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Primarily,muchasmanyeldersarepleasedtoenjoytheirtwilight

years,itdoesnotlookfeasiblesincemostyoungsters,breadwinners

infamilies,areswampedwithworkunderthiscut-throatcompetition,

underwhichcircumstance,theirparentswillvoluntarilyhelpthemwith

choresandministertotheirgrandchildren.Consequently,hardlydo

theyhavesufficienttimetotakesports.Anothermajorcontributing

factorwouldhavemuchtodowiththetransformedlifestylesofthe

elderly.Unlikethepastwhenpeoplehavelimitedformsof

entertainment,thecurrentdigitaleraissaturatedwithintriguing

activities,rangingfromsurfingtheinternettoshootingofftosee

amusingvideos,whichtightlygriptheoldsattention.Benefitedfrom

itsonlineconvenienceanddiversity,theoldwillbeindisposedtostep

outforexercises.Undeniableisalsothefactthatthelackoftailored

creationalamenitiesinthevicinity