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AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISE【2021.06新高考一卷】

circle:1.maincharacters(emtion+personality)2.plot(theproblemtobesolved)3.time(changed?bespecial?)4.place(changed?bespecial?)5.theme(title)6.givensentencesCoherence:asmanyaspossiblewordsphrases

1.Who2.Where3.When4.Whathappened5.Why（theme）twins--Jenna（agirl）Jeff(aboy),mother,fatherinthekitchenAt6:00amThetwinswantedtomakebreakfastformomasaMothersDaysurpriseexpressgratitudeandlovetotheirmomReadforelementsupstairs：inthebedroomSummary:Thestoryisaboutthetwins(who)tryingtopreparebreakfast(what)inthekitchen(where)onMother’sDaymorning(when)togiveasurprisefortheirmom(why)buttheymetwithsomedifficulties.

ReadtwogivensentencesAsthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.情节思路——ARE原则（Action、Response、Emotion）①father’sresponse(--)②Fatherhelpedthempreparethebreakfasthow+what③Thebreakfastwasready.①mother’sresponseandthetwins②thesceneofthemorning(breakfast)celebrationofMother’sDay③thethemeGratitudetomother’shardwork\Houseworkneedstobelearned,sharedbyeveryfamilymember.

ReadtwogivensentencesAsthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Coherence（4sentences)①Lookingatthemessinthekitchen,Dadwasabitannoyed.②Afterthebreakfastwasready,thetwinswereeagertoletmotherenjoythedeliciousfoodatonce.③Uponopeningeyes,whatgreetedherinstantlywasaplateofhotandtastybreakfast.④Awarmcurrentoflovefilledthewholeroom.Whatasweetsurprise!父亲了解缘由（relieved）--加入制作（encourageandinstruct）--目的达成（delighted）母亲看到惊喜早餐（surpised，moved）--父亲反应（proud）--共同庆祝（happy）

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