2024届高考英语作文复习专项读后续写个人成长类--爸爸指导下第一次骑自行车讲义-.docxVIP

读后续写原题目呈现：

Afteraverymeaningfulconversationwithmydadabouttheolddays,wecameupwithanobjectthatwebothrememberedclearly.Itwasmyveryfirstbicycle.MymindtoldmeIgotitwhenIwasseven,whowascheatedtorideitforfiftyyardsalonethefirsttimeItried!

??Mydadputtogetherallthesmallpiecesofthebicyclefromabeautifulmaterialthathecalled,“Yourowncar.OfcourseIknewhehadsomemagicalability,butIdidntthinkhecouldmakesuchanawesomeobject.Headdedtheseatandthepedals（踏板）sothatIwouldnothaveanyproblems.MydadrecalledthebicyclewasthesmallesthecouldfindwhileIrememberhowhugeitwas.IwassoafraidofitandtherewasnowaythatIwasgoingtocontrolthatmonster-sizedmaterial.Thebicyclewasleftinmybackyardasadecorationforamonthbecauselrefusedtorideit.Honestly,Iwasscaredtotryit.

??Afteramonth,mydadgavemealecturetoteachmewhatbeingamanwasallabout.Iwasfinallydeterminedtotryit.MydadwasproudofmeandIfeltverymanly.HeandIwenttotheparktoseewhatwecoulddothere.

??Theparkwasemptywhenwearrived.Ihadnodoubtthatmydadtoldeverybodynottobetherebecausewehadtouseit.Ifeltsorryforotherpeople，butIwasproudtohavesuchanomnipotent（全?能的）personasmydad.

??Wefoundasmoothandopenspace.MydadwasholdingthebackpartoftheseattomakesureIdidntfell.HepromisedmethatIwasnotgoingtofallbecausehewouldberunningrightbehind,holdingthebicycle.

注意：

???1．续写词数应为150左右；

??2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置

Istartedtopedalandthebicyclemoved.

Iturnedaroundandfoundmydadwasnotbehind.

【前文分析】

??文体为personalnarrativewriting，叙述的是个人第一次的骑行经历。文本较为简单。具体情节为作者我在爸爸的鼓励和帮助下第一次学习骑自行车，在爸爸再三承诺会扶着自行车后座后我不知不觉地骑了50yards，转头却发现爸爸早就放开了手...

【续写框架】

Para1:Istartedtopedalandthebicyclemoved.

1.HowdidIfeeloncethebicyclemoved?

2.Howwoulddadrespond?

3.WhywouldIturnaround?

Para2: