2024届高考英语作文复习专项读后续写：雀斑烦恼任务单素材.docxVIP

读后续写：雀斑烦恼（教师版）

一、原文

WhenIwasakidabouttwelveyearsold,Ihadalotoffreckles(雀斑).IhadreachedtheagewhenIhadbeguntoreallylookatmyselfinthemirror,andIwasdisappointed.Apparentlymymotherwastoo,becausesometimesshedlookatmeandshakeherhead.

lhadacousinwhosenamewasJanetteElizabeth.Shelookedexactlylikehernamesounds.Shehadaflawlesspeaches-and-creamcomplexion(肤色).IcouldnthelpcomparingmyselfwithherandthinkingthatmylifewouldbealotdifferentifIhadbeautifulskintoo.

Andthen,inthebackpagesofJanetteElizabethsmagazine,Ifoundtheanswer:anadvertisementforfreckle-removercream.IknewthatIcouldafforditifIsavedmymoney,andIdid.Theadassuredmethattheproductwouldworkwell.ForthreeweeksIwenttothemailboxeverydaypreciselyatthetimethemailwasdelivered.Iknewthatifsomeoneelseinmyfamilygotthemail,Iwouldneverheartheendofit.Therewasnowaythattheywouldletmeopentheboxinprivate.

Threeweekslater,mypackagefinallycame.Iwenttomyroomwithit,satontheedgeofmybed,andopenedit.IwassurethatIwaslookingatamiracle.WhenIgotupthenextmorning,Iappliedthecreamallovermybody.ThenItookmyhoeandwentwithmybrotherandcousinstohoethefield,whereIgotridofsometigerlilies(虎尾百合),seeminglyuglywithblackandsmallspots.

Thesunwassostrongthatevenmyfacesstartedtoburn.Bytheendoftheday,whenIcamebacktothehouse,myfamily,knowingnothingaboutthefreckle-removercream,begantosaythingslike,Iveneverseenyouwiththatmanyfrecklesbefore.WhenIsawmyselfinthemirror,Idissolvedintotearsandhidinthebathroom.

Paragraph1:Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.

Paragraph2:?Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom.

二、分句练习

Para1：Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.

（1）她没有得到我的任何回应，就焦急地加快脚步向浴室