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大学校园是否对游客开放英语作文

【篇一：名校校园正成为旅游新景点(英语作文)】

名校校园正成为旅游新景点，对此人们看法不同，你的观点是。。。

currently,campusesoffamousuniversitieshavebecomeone

ofthepopulartouristdestinations.thephenomenonhas

arousedgreatpublicconcern.thereisnoconsensus(一致，共

识)ofopinionsamongpeopleastowhethertheuniversity

campusshouldbeopentotourists.

ifaskedtovoicemyviewonthis,ifavorthelattergroupof

people.whethercampustourbringsprofitsornot,itshould

notbebannedaslongastouristsobeycampusregulations.

andiamconvincedthatcampustouraresuretodogoodto

thepopularizationofuniversitycultures.

【篇二：shouldtheuniversitycampusbeopento

tourists】

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问题作文

shouldtheuniversitycampusbeopentotourists?

nowadays,theuniversitycampusisbeingtoahotspotof

tour.increasingpeoplewanttohaveavisitonuniversity

campusduetokindsofreasons.however,whetherthe

universitycampusshouldbeopentotourists?thedebatehas

beendiscussinginalongrun.

peoplefromdifferentbackgroundhavedifferent

conclusions.somepeopleholdthepositiveidea,andtheythink

itisgoodforselectiontouniversity.but,othersarguethe

universitycampusistheplacestudentsgetknowledge.thusit

woulddisturbthequietatmosphereofcampus.

forme,ithinkwecanorganizepeopletohaveaviewon

campusincertaintime,butdontturncampustobeatravel

spot.theformostfuctionofcampusistoteach.students,talents

ofourcountry,arethemostimportant.

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切题度一般，加油

语言错误较少，加油

题目要求：录入内容

1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点

2.校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同

3.我认为…

作文批改建议

shouldtheuniversitycampusbeopentotourists?

第一段：

①nowadays,theuniversitycampusisbeingtoahotspotof

tour.

首先，大学校园是泛指概念，而不是特指概念，所以,the

universitycampus不用the，而且要用复数形式,university

campuses。虽说这里的hotspot表达没有错误，但的第一次出现

的“旅游热点”这个感念来说不够正式，而且“正在成为很流行的旅游

景点”的表达不