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构建续写模型21345公式1情感1.Awave/surge/senseof+情感名词(joy/pride/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/disappointment/guilt/shame)+seized/overwhelmed/washedover/floodedover/sweptover/flowedover/cameover+sb.(+like….)某人感到(一阵)……Astrongwaveoffearsweepingoverhim,Mikecouldntutterasingleword.一阵强烈的恐惧传遍他的全身，迈克一个字也说不出来。2.A(slight)feelingof+情感名词+creptoversb.某人渐渐产生(一丝)……Aslightfeelingofsuspicioncreptoverme.我渐渐地产生了一丝疑虑。3.（表高兴、激动的)情感名词+wasshining/twinkling/sparklinginoneseyes.某人眼里闪着……的光芒。Excitementwasshininginhereyes.(=Hereyeswereshiningwithexcitement.)她兴奋得两眼发光。4.情感名词(Fear/Terror/Panic/Surprise/Shock/Embarrassment等)+rootedsb.tothespot.某人吓呆/惊呆/尴尬得呆住。Embarrassmentrootedhertothespot.她尴尬得呆住了。5.情感名词A+gavewayto/wassweptawayby/wasreplacedby+情感名词B.(……变为……/……为……所取代。)1.Herpreviouscalmgavewayto/wassweptawaybyterror.她先前的泰然自若已变为惊恐。2.Hisinitialexcitementwasreplacedbyadeepsenseofdisappointment.他最初的兴奋被深深的失望所取代。公式2心理表示“（因为紧张、害怕）心跳”sb.couldfeelone’sheartpoundingwildlyinone’schest.(pounding/beating/racing)(wildly/loudly/hard)感到心在胸中砰砰直跳上台领奖时我感到心砰砰直跳。IcouldfeelmyheartpoundingasIwentonstagetocollecttheprize.他打开信，心在咚咚跳着。Heunfoldedtheletter,hisheartracing.表示“流泪”1.Tearsblurredone’seyes.泪眼模糊2....beclosetotears几乎要哭了3.tears(rolldownone’seyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下1)当得知我被重点大学录取时，我妈差点儿就哭了。MymotherwasclosetotearswhensheheardIwasadmittedtoakeyuniversity.2)他站在一个角落里，泪流满面。Hestoodinacornerwithtearsrollingdownhisface.表示“因……颤抖”tremble/shiver/shake(withfear,panicexcitement,rage...)仿写：1)她双唇颤抖着，泪珠顺着面颊滚落下来。Herlipsshiveredandbigtearsrolleddownhercheeks.2)他握紧拳头，气得发抖。Heclenchedhisfists,tremblingwithrage.3)他躺在那里很长时间，害怕得发抖。Helaythereforalongtime,shiveringwithfear.表示“发出……（声音）”1.Therewereloudshoutsandcheers(from…)when…从……传来喊叫与欢呼声。2.letoutacry/screamofhorror/fear/terror/shock/surprise/pain…1)当他登上讲台时,现场传来了