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全国创新英语大赛辅导;Thebicycleisimportantforus.

Thebicycleisofimportanceforus.

Thebicycleplaysanimportantroleinourlife.

Thebicycle,environmentalfriendlyvehicle,playsanimportantroleinourlife.

Thebicycleisliketheair,water,andsunshineandcannotbepartedwithamomentinourlife.

;走出房间，

空洞的表达方式：

walkoutoftheroom

小偷走出房间应该说：

slip/sneakoutoftheroom

美女走出房间应该说：

sailoutoftheroom

小孩走出房间应该说：

danceoutoftheroom

老人走出房间应该说：

staggeroutoftheroom

;差的作文中简单句多，而好的作文简单句少；差的作文从句、连词、分词结构出现的频率大大低于好的作文；差的作文中关键词和同义表达出现的频率低于好的作文。;a.语言准确化

b.语言多样化

c.结构清晰化

d.内容简单化

;写作的三个角度：

语言第一位；

结构第二位；

内容第三位

结构简单，语言卓越，内容相关

;创新真题:

Chinesepeoplealwayshavethetraditionofhelpingothers;regardlessofafriendorastranger.However,inrecentyears,peoplefindthatwhentheytrytohelpothers,somechangesaretakingplaces.Oneofthemostcommonexlesisthat,apasser-bywhosentaninjuredseniorpeopletohospitalwouldbeverylikelytoberecognizedastheaccident-maker.Thiskindofeventsisbeingrerunagainandagain.Whentrappedinthedilemmaoftraditionandtrouble,whatwouldbeyourchoice?;议论文

1.陈述观点（有独到见解）

2.论证观点或理由（思路清晰，观点明确，论证充分；语言流畅，词汇丰富，句式多样；有效地使用语句、段落间的连接成分,内容连贯，结构紧凑;词汇和语法使用恰当,错误较少。）

3.总结(呼应主题);1.医生只是换了个头.

2.修改后的病人，戴了项链，戴了眼镜，头发竖起，头上流汗。

3.从修改过的病人中能够看出霸道、愤怒、自大等一些关键词

;五个步骤:;3、连词成句：用连词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。;①使用较高级的词汇;1.Wealthdoesnotalwaysbringhappiness.

Wealthdoesnotalwaysgohandinhandwithhappiness.

2.Weallknowthatknowledgeispower.

Thereisnodoubtthatknowledgeispower.

Itgoeswithoutsayingthatknowledgeispower.;3.Theremanywaystokeepfit.

Therearenumerouswaystokeepfit.

4.Weshouldusedifferentwaystogettoknowthesociety.

Weoughttomakeuseofvariousmethodstogettoknowthesociety.

Wearesupposedtotakeadvantageofdiversemeanstogettoknowthesociety.

;5.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.

6.Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithso