2024届高考英语模拟卷应用文典例：活动类课件(共18张PPT).pptxVIP

应用文典例：活动类讲义;01探望空巢老人;01探望空巢老人;keywords:人与社会；社区服务；空巢老人；活动意义;Heartwarmingvisittoemptynestersinthecommunity

Yesterdayafternoonwitnessedameaningfulactivityorganizedby

ourStudentsUnion.Somestudentsofourschoolbroughtjoytothe

elderlywhoareleftbehindaloneathome.

Theactivitywasheldinthecommunityhallwherethestudents

andtheelderlyallenjoyedeachotherscompany.Tobeginwith,the

studentsdeliveredtheconcernandwarmthtotheelderly.Thenthey

gavewonderfulperformancesincludingdancingandsinging.The

friendshipbetweentheresidentsandthestudentswasbuilt.

Theactivityturnedouttobeagreatsuccess,leavingalasting

impressiononboththestudentsandtheelderlyandfosteringasense

ofunityandcommunitycare.;02元旦登高迎新年;keywords:人与自我，活动报道，文化内涵;主要问题：

一、设计活动过程时忽略了“登高”的文化象征意义，描写活动感想时

缺乏亲身视角。二、语言表达苍白，缺少“氛围感”。

学生习作精句(润色后)

班级学生习作精句(润色后)

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;Withtheintentionofreceivinggoodluckandwelcomingthenew

year,westudentsgatheredatthefootofEnGumountainand

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Duringtheclimbing,wedevelopedafirmresolutiontoworkharder

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;Afterthisclimbingactivity,itdawnedonusthatadreamdoesnt

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