读后续写：情节设计(主旨+主题+性格+衔接)-2025届高三英语作文复习专项.pptx

ContinuationWriting

——Howtoplotastory

Attheendoftheclass,youwillbeableto:(1)acquirethebasicskillsofhowtoplotastory;(2)applytheskillstoplotastory.Learningobjectives

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情节评分标准语言衔接

Whatdifficultiesareyoufacedwithincontinuationwriting?（）A.PlotB.LanguageC.CoherenceBefore-classSurvey

问题2：情节不连贯，逻辑性不强。问题1：文本解读不到位，续写情节偏离原文。学情反馈问题3：续写情节中人物特征不突出，细节描写不够生动。问题4：未能升华主题或者主题升华脱离原文主题。thegivensentencesmainideacharacterstheme

Howtoplotastory?ReadforthemainideaReadforthethemeReadforcharactersReadthegivensentencescarefully

?WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest,Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.?So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.?IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny,andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.?Whatdidthehorsethink,asspedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Ig