2024-2025学年高一英语续写作文课件.pptxVIP

Withthewintervocationapproaching,I’mpleasedtomakeaplanforthecomingdays.

SinceIamaseniorhighstudent,muchofmytimewillbespentonstudying,thoughitistimeforrest.I’lltrytofinishallthehomeworkasitisrequiredbymyteachers.Apartfromhomework,I’dliketohaveatripwithmyfriendstovisitsomescenicspotstoappreciatethebeautyofnatureandbreathefreshair,whichcanbroadenourhorizonsandrelaxourselvesafterthetoughexam.Inaddition,Iwilldosportsasusual,suchasplayingtabletennis,whichisgoodformyhealth.

IbelieveI’llhaveagoodtimeduringthevacation.Mayallofyouhaveanicevacation!;;读后续写的评分标准;高考中的读后续写是什么样子的？;;;1.Beforewriting;1.Beforewriting

;②草拟提纲：备脉络，备词汇;3.Afterwriting;;1.写前;2.写中;2.写中;2.写中;Paragraph1:

Shesatdowntocomfortme.“Areyouokay?”sheasked.Itoldheraboutmytrouble.ThenMs.Brownsaidtome,“Weallmakemistakes.”Shetoldmewhathappenedtoherseveraldaysago.IwassurprisedthatshealsomademistakessinceIhadthoughtshewasperfect.Shetoldmetheworlddidn’tendbecauseIgotazeroinamathclassandencouragedmetostudyhard.

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Ifeltrelaxedanddecidedtoworkharderatmath.Inmathclasses,Ipaidmoreattentiontotheteacher’slectures.Afterreachinghomeafterschool,Iwoulddothemathhomeworkmorecarefully.AndIleftnotestoremindmenottoforgettobringmyhomeworktoschoolagain.Attheendofthatterm,basedonmygooddailyperformancesandtestscores,myfinalmathaveragewasanA.Thisexperiencetaughtmealesson:aslongaswelearnfrommistakes,we’remakingprogress.;;summary：;Homework：

1.Finishthesecondparagraph.

2.Haveatryatrevisingyourwriting.