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专题05写作

目录

01挑战真题·查学问漏洞

02回顾教材·补学问漏洞

回顾学问体系

回顾核心考点

易混易错归纳

03学问通关演练

1．（2023·全国·高考真题）??假定你是李华，外教Ryan预备将同学随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.说明问题；

2.提出建议。

留意：

??1.写作词数应为80个左右；

??2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearRyan,

I’mLiHuafromClass3.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】DearRyan,

I’mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit’snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.

Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.

Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.

Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告知他将同学随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。

【详解】1.词汇积累

首先：tobeginwith→firstofall

提高：improve→progress

建议：suggestion→advice

选择：choose→select

2.句式拓展

简洁句变复合句

原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.

拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguage