高考英语复习读后续写练习：父亲的教诲：关于身边的朋友+课件.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习父亲的教诲：关于身边的朋友1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文WhenIwasabout12,Ihadanenemy,agirlwholikedtopointoutmyshortcomings.Weekbyweek,littlebylittle,herlistgrew:Iwasverythin;Iwasntagoodstudent;Italkedtoomuch;Iwastooproud;Ididntliketohelpothers;Ididntfinishmyhomework;Ididntcareforanyoneandsoon.ItriedtohearalltheseaslongasIcould.Atlast,Ibecameveryangry.AndIwastooupsetanddidntknowwhattodonext.IfeltIwastheworstgirlintheworld.Lifewashardformeatthattime.Irantomyfatherwithtearsinmyeyesforhelp.4

续写原文Helistenedtomequietly,andthenheasked,“Arethethingsshesaidtrueornot?Janet,didntyoueverwonderwhatyourereallylike?Well,younowhavethatgirlsopinion.Thatisagoodthing.Goandmakealistofeverythingshesaidandmarkthepointsthataretrue.Paynoattentiontotheotherthingsshesaid.ThatisOK.”ThenIdidasmyfathertoldme.Tomygreatsurprise,Idiscoveredthatabouthalfofthethingsshesaidtomeweretrue.SomeofthemIcouldntchange(likebeingverythin),butagoodnumberofthethingsIcould—andsuddenlyIwantedtochange.ForthefirsttimeIgotofairlyclearpictureofmyself.Ineverfeelupsetnow.IbroughtthelistbacktoDaddy.Herefusedtolookatit.Ifeltverysurprised.5

段首句Para1：“Thats?just?for?you，”he?said.Para2：Daddys?advice?has?returned?to?me?at?many?important?moments.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了玛丽向父亲抱怨自己有一个“敌友”，面对玛丽的抱怨，玛丽的父亲并没有说什么，反而是引导自己的女儿自己去发现问题，最后得到教育的故事。

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9

续写思路分析Para1：“Thats?just?for?you，”he?said.由第一段首句内容“‘那是给你的，’他说。”可知，第一段可描写父亲建议玛丽要倾听，做她认为正确的事。10

续写思路分析Para2：Daddys?advice?has?returned?to?me?at?many?important?moments.由第二段首句内容“爸爸的建议在许多重要时刻都回响在我耳边。”可知，第二段可描写玛丽对父亲的教诲铭记。11

续写思路分析续写线索父亲教诲——接受批评——感谢——感悟12

续写素材可用词汇：行为类①充满：becrowdedwith/befilled