高考英语一轮复习+路上遇到男孩掉到了马路上的大洞里，联系路人一起搭救+课件.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习路上遇到男孩掉到了马路上的大洞里，联系路人一起搭救1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Theskywasdark.Rainfellinbigdropsandthunderandlightningflashedacrossthesky.IshiveredwithcoldandfearasIwalkedthroughthestreamsofmuddywater.Somepeoplewererushingby,completelybathedintheheavyrain.Alongtheway,Isawsomeschoolchildrencarryingtheirheavyschoolbagsandrushinghome.Ialsosawthatsomeroadrepairworkhadbeenabandonedbyworkers.Obviously,theworkershadleftinahurrybecauseofthestorm.Therewerefewsignsanditwashardtoseewhatwasontheroad.Therewerepiecesofwoodandslabsofmetalandaholeseemedtohavebeendugandhurriedlycoveredwithwoodenboards.4

续写原文ImovedonbutsuddenlystoppedasIheardsomeonecrying.Iquicklyturnedbacktotheplacewherethesoundscame.Iwashorrified!Tomyshock,thereseemedtobeasmallchildstuckinthebigholeontheroad.Thewoodenboardshadmovedawaywiththeforceoftherushingwater.ThoughIcouldbarelyidentifyhowdeeptheholewasandwhethertherewasanyothervictimasitwasdarkallaroundme,Iwassure,atleast,thechildwasnotonlystuckinthehole,butfacedtheriskofgettingdrowned.ItoldhimthatIwasgoingtogethelp.5

段首句Para1：Actually,Iwasnotsureofwhattodoorwheretogobutdecidedtogotothenearesthouseforhelp.Para2：Theparentsofthechildwhojustarrivedfromworkweretotallyshockedtohearofwhathadhappened.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者看见了有一个小孩被困在马路上的大洞里，作者寻求到一个男人帮助，将小男孩救出，作者对于自己能够帮助邻居的事情感到震惊和美好的故事。

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9

续写思路分析Para1:Actually,Iwasnotsureofwhattodoorwheretogobutdecidedtogotothenearesthouseforhelp.由第一段首句内容“事实上，我不知道该做什么或去哪里，但决定去最近的房子寻求帮助。”可知，第一段可描写作者寻找别人去救小男孩。10

续写思路分析Para2：Theparentsofthechildwhojustarrivedfromworkweretotallyshockedtohearofwhat