1读后续写微技能--动作描写.pptx

读后续写微技能

--动作描写;Actionisessential:;Actionisessential:;Howtomaketheaction

descriptionmorevivid？;;;Actionchains;【变形】Seeingthemessystoveandtheblackbread,father

feltabitshockedandaskedthemwhathadhappened.;2.当马看到突然出现的兔子，受到了惊吓，便开始狂奔

(shock;ranwildly)

【actionchains】

Thehorsesawtherabbit,

gotshockedandthenranwildly.

【Type2】

Seeingtherabbit,thehorse

gotshockedandthenranwildly.;;Typefour---类型4：Havingdone,主语+谓语A,andB.;1.动作链(actionChains)一般有4种常用类型：;;;;TranslatesentencesandfocusontheVerbs.;【practice】Testyourunderstanding;【practice】Writeaccordingtothegivencontext.;;一个人的动作，会折射出他的情感态度。因此动作描写与情感态度是相辅相成，密不可分的。加入合适的情感态度，会给动作描写增光添彩。;1.动作描写，夹带感情，会让语言更加丰富和生动。

1)Sheshookherheadindisblief.

2)Sheclappedherhandsindelight.

3)Sheshruggedhershouldersinconfusion,showingthatshedidntknow.

4）Shelookedintomyeyes,apologizingtomeforherbeinglatewithguilt.;【practice】练一练：动词词组+介宾情感短语;2.无灵主语+具体动词拟人化，可以使表达具有生动的特点。;【practice】练一练：“无灵主语+具体情感动词”拟人化;;动词描写与心理语言;Heabruptelygotmadwithfury,

poundedhisfistsonthewalland

beathisbreast,“Goaway!Leaveme

alone!”;3.“猫猫救主”片段：我被困在漆黑的4米深的地窖，描写我向猫咪求救的画面。;;瞟了我一眼;;Feelingthrilled,sheflaggedheryellowblouseandyelledatthetopofherlungs,“Iamhere”,tryingtoattractothersattention.;Restlessnessinterwovenwithexcitement,Itookadeep

breathandquickenedmybriskpacetowardsthestage,

myfaceglowingwithsheerexhilaration.;SeeYou!