近三年2024_2025中考英语满分作文解析山东卷.docVIP

中考英语满分作文解析：山东卷

2024年

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Writeareview（评论）ofthefollowingstoryinabout120words．Thereviewhastoincludethefollowingpoints．（阅读下面的故事，请依据下面的提示，写出一篇约120词的评论）．

（1）Thetitleofyourreview．（你撰写的评论的标题．）

（2）Youridea（s），examplesandthereason（s）forunhappinessandhappinessinthestory．（你归纳的关于故事中华蜜和不华蜜的观点，举例子并说明缘由．）

（3）Youridea（s）ofhappiness，examplesforhappinessinyourdailylife．（归纳你在日常生活中关于华蜜的观点，并举例说明．）

（4）Yourconclusionabouthappiness．（关于华蜜的结论．）

（5）Thewordsyoumayuse．（你可能用到的词）besatisfiedwith（对……满足）desiren．欲望contentment知足thekey（关键）tohappiness．

Alongtimeago，inarichandbeautifulcountry，therelivedanunhappyking．Hesleptbadlyanddidntfeellikeeating．Heoftencriedfornoreason．Thismadethequeenandhispeopleworried．Sotheycalledadoctortoexaminehim．Buthefoundnothingwrongwithhisbody．Hesaidwhatthekingneededwastheshirtofahappypersontowear．Thatwouldmakehimhappy．

Theprimeministerwascalledtothepalace．Butwhentheyexplainedthekingssituationtohim，hesaid，AlthoughIhavealotofpower，itdoesntmakemehappy．Imalwaysworriedaboutlosingmypower．

Thenthekingsbankercametosay，ImafraidImnothappyeither．Ihavealotofwealth，butImalwaysworriedaboutlosingmoney．Someonetriestostealmymoney．Next，thepalacesingerwascalledtosay，ImfamousbutImnothappybecauseImworriedaboutbeingfollowedbyothers．Icantbefree．

Finally，thetopgeneralwastoldtogoouttofindahappyman．Hesearchedandsearchedbutcouldntfindanyone．Everyoneseemedtohavetheirownproblems，andnoonewastrulyhappy．Justashewantedtogiveup．hesawapoormanonthestreet．Hewaseatingwithhishandsandsinginghappilytohimself．Thegeneralwenttohimandsaid，Whatmakesyousohappy？Youhavenopower，money，orfame．Themansaid，IhaveeverythingIwant．andIdontwantwhatIcanthave．SoImhappy，andmysongcomesfromthehappinessinmyheart