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2011年6月大学英语六级靠题与智泰洋廨完整版

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标准版Myopiniononcertificatecraze

Thegrowingtendencyamongcollegestudentstogetallkindsofcertificateshasnowevolvedintoa

craze.Justrandomlyaskastudentwhatheorsheisbusilyengagedindoing,quitepossibly,youwouldget

theanswerthatheorsheispreparingfbracertificateofsomekind.So,whysthecraze

Thereasonbehindthisphenomenoniscommon—theenormouspressureoffindingajob.Facedwith

aharshjobmarket,moststudentshavenochoicebuttoseekmorecertificatestoparlaytheirqualifications.

Anotherfactoristhatdiplomaandcertificatesstillweighsheavilyintermsofsignifyingonesability.For

thesakeofincreasingtheiroddsoflandingabetterjob,thestudentsarecompelledtorunfromoneexamto

another.

ThoughIhaveanopenmindtowardthecrazeoncertificates,Isuggestthatstudentsshouldbemore

rationalwhenitcomestocertificates,sincetheydonotnecessarilytelltheirability.Instead,theyshouldbe

moreinvolvedinlearningandcapabilityboosting,thus,opportunitieswouldcomequitenaturally.

文章点评：

这是一集“中偏上的学生作文。本文先对学生的考证热进行简介，引出全篇；接着分析这一现象

背后的原因；整体看思路清晰，逻辑严密，行文流畅，句式多变，用语较为地道。

本篇亮点表达：

Thegrowingtendency...hasnowevolvedinto...

bebusilyengagedindoing

Thereasonbehind...

harshjobmarket

havenochoicebutto...

parlaytheirqualifications

sth.weighsheavilyintermsof...

increasingonesoddsof...

beinvolvedindoing...

becompelledtodo...

haveanopenmindtoward...

capabilityboosting

本文有待提高之处：

1.文章结构上，能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”(提出问题、分析问题、解决问题)。

逻辑严谨，论证严密；句式表达灵活，用语较为地道。

2.微观语言点方面，有个主谓一致的方面的错误(diplomaandcertificatesstillweighsheavily)