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【审题谋篇】体裁科幻故事人称第一人称时态一般过去时话题关于飞碟的故事框架第一段:交代故事背景(时间、地点等)。第二段:故事发生的过程(主要情节)。第三段:自己的想法和感受。【遣词造句】1.词汇(1)困惑的adj.?(2)降落?(3)飞走?(4)我所看到的?(5)他手里拿着什么东西?puzzledcomedownflyawaywhatIhadseenwithsomethinginhishand2.句式(1)要点翻译①晚上太热了,我在帐篷里睡不着。Itwassohotatnightinthetent.?②我爬出帐篷,四处走动以便冷静下来。Icrawledoutofthetentandwalkedaround.?③突然,一道亮光划过天空,那时一个飞碟出现在我的帐篷附近。Suddenlyabrightlightandthennearmytentappearedaflyingsaucer.?④它看起来就像我白天读的书里的那个一样。Itlookedjustliketheoneinthebookduringtheday.?thatIcouldn’tfallasleeptocooldownflashedacrosstheskyIhadread(2)句式升级⑤用so把句①和句②合并成复合句。⑥用倒装句改写句③并用定语从句合并句③和句④。ItwashotatnightandIcouldn’tfallasleepinthetent,soIcrawledoutofthetentandwalkedaroundtocooldown.Suddenlyabrightlightflashedacrosstheskyandthennearmytentappearedaflyingsaucer,whichlookedjustliketheoneinthebookIhadreadduringtheday.【妙笔成篇】TheSaucer?ItwashotatnightandIcouldn’tfallasleepinthetent,soIcrawledoutofthetentandwalkedaroundtocooldown.Theskywasclearandstarswereshining.Suddenlyabrightlightflashedacrosstheskyandthennearmytentappearedaflyingsaucer,whichlookedjustliketheoneinthebookIhadreadduringtheday.Iquicklyhidbehindastoneandsawanaliencomedownthrougharounddoor.Hewalkedintomytentandcameoutwithsomethinginhishand.TheUFOthenflewaway.IimmediatelyranintomytentandfoundthatmyPadwasgone.IwassopuzzledthatIcouldn’tbelievewhatIhadseen.ButIdecidedthatthenexttimethealiencame,Iwouldtalktohim.针对训练随着生活节奏的加快,人们没有时间照顾老年人,这成为一个突出的社会问题,于是你想发明一种家庭机器人。请以“TheHouseholdRobot”为题写一篇短文。内容要点:1.做饭;2.陪伴;3.应对紧急状况。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:突出的prominentTheHouseholdRobotDuetothefastpaceoflifeinmodernsociety,lifepres