2021年10月30日雅思考试机经·写作 - pressure on offspring.docx

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2021年10月30日雅思考试机经·写作 - pressure on offspring.docx

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小作文

Thetablegivesinformationaboutthefemaleworkforceandfemalemanagersinfivecountries.

Percentagesofworkforcewhoarewomen

Percentagesofmanagerswhoarewomen

Australia

Egypt

Japan

SriLanka

theUS

Thetabledemonstratesthepercentagesoffemaleemployeesandfemalesmanagersinfivenations.

TheUSAandAustraliapossessrelativelyhigherproportionsoffemalesinworkingpositions,46%and42%respectively.Intermsofwomeninmanagerialposts,thetwoEnglish-speakingcountriessharesimilarrates(43%and41%),alittlelessthanthatofworkers.

However,inthetwoAsiancountries,JapanandSriLanka,itisnoticeablethatalthoughthepercentagesoffemaleworkforce,41%and37%separately,areslightlylowerthanthosetwomentioned,theirproportionsforwomenmanagersareconsiderablylower,around10%each.

ThedataofEgyptshowthatonly20%ofthetotalworkforceconsistsofwomenand12%ofmanagersofthisgender,muchlessthantheaverageratesamongthefivenations.

Overall,lesswomentherethanmeninthelistedareastakepartinjobstovaryingdegreesandwomenalsoseemtohavelessopportunitiestogetpromotionintoseniorposts.

大作文

Nowadays,someparentsputalotofpressureontheirchildren.Whyparentsthereasonfordoingthat?Isthisapositiveornegativedevelopmentforthechildren?

这篇总体很好写，相信很多烤鸭都有深切体会，不多说上提纲；

reason:1.awareoftheimportanceofeducation;2.competitionsforfuturejobs;3.greatergenerationgap

positive:qualifiedfuturegeneration;

negative:pressure,mentaldisease,familyissuesandexpenses

范文：

Asthesocietyisgettingmoreknowledge-orientedanddiversified,parentsacknowledgetheimportanceofeducationanddisapprovethechangesoftheworld,leadingtoagreaterexertionofpressureontheiroffspringandmajorlynegativeimpactsforfamilies.

Therearethreemajorreasonscausingparents’concerns.First,mostyoungparentsnowadaysareawa