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2021年8月28日雅思考试机经·写作

Schoolleaversprefertotravelorworkratherthandirectlygoingtouniversity.Aretheremoreadvantagesordisadvantagesontheirstudy?

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gapyear是雅思写作一个老题，本题问的是这个选择的优劣势。

优点可以从历练积累、视野开阔、变得独立这三个点进行递进称述；

缺点可以考虑间隔年后不再返校进行论述，但是因为社会对于个人资质要求越来越高，这种情况不太会发生。

除了例文中写的优缺点，职业规划的思考、安全问题也是比较好写的点。

Itisquitecommonthesedaysforyoungpeopleinmanycountriestohaveabreakfromstudyingaftergraduatingfromhighschool.Thistrendisnotrestrictedtorichstudentswhohavethemoneytotravel,butisalsoevidentamongpoorerstudentswhochoosetoworkandbecomeeconomicallyindependentforaperiodoftime.

Thereasonsforthistrendmayinvolvetherecognitionthatayoungadultwhopassesdirectlyfromschooltouniversityisratherrestrictedintermsofgeneralknowledgeandexperienceoftheworld.Bycontrast,thosewhohavespentsometimeearningalivingortravelingtootherplaces,haveabroaderviewoflifeandbetterpersonalresourcestodrawon.Theytendtobemoreindependent,whichisaveryimportantfactorinacademicstudyandresearch,aswellasgivingthemanadvantageintermsofcopingwiththechallengesofstudentlife.

However,therearecertainlydangersintakingtimeoffatthatimportantage.Youngadultsmayendupneverreturningtotheirstudiesorfindingitdifficulttoreadapttoanacademicenvironment.Theymaythinkthatitisbettertocontinueinaparticularjob,ortodosomethingcompletelydifferentfromauniversitycourse.Butoverall,Ithinkthisislesslikelytoday,whenacademicqualificationsareessentialforgettingareasonablecareer.

Myviewisthatyoungpeopleshouldbeencouragedtobroadentheirhorizons.Thatisthebestwayforthemtogetaclearperspectiveofwhattheyarehopingtodowiththeirlivesandwhy.Studentswithsuchaperspectiveareusuallythemosteffectiveandmotivatedonesandtakingayearoffmaybethebestwaytogainthis.

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