读后续写练习写作高分作文评析讲义-2024届高三英语一轮复习 .pdfVIP

读后续写练习写作高分作文评析讲义

一、试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

hasacertainfearofspidersbutdidn’twanttoseekprofessionalhelpfromadoctortoovercome

andslippeduphispants.Nothingsofrighteninghadeverhappenedtohimbefore.At

thatmoment,herememberedtwofactshehadreadinaNational

Geographicmagazine.Alf-spiders,eventhesmallestones,carrypoisonandcaninject(注射)it

andspidersonlysting(叮，刺

thebigspider,Enriquewascertainthatthespidermusthaveplentyofpoisoninit.

Therefore,hethoughtthemostsensiblethingtodowastostandstill,sincetheslightest

movementwouldresultintheanimalinjectinghimwithadeadlyamountofpoison.

Hekeptstillforfivetosixhours,hopingthatthespiderwouldeventuallyleavebutitdidnot.

Despitehiswife’s

needed.

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Aftertheaccident,Enrique’slifechangedalot.

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二、试题分析

【What】

1.故事人物：

①主要人物有作者“I”的朋友Enrique，次要人物是作者“I”和Enrique的妻子。

②人物特点：Enrique是一个害怕蜘蛛却不愿寻求专业医疗帮助的成年人。作者“I”是

一个乐于助人的人。Enrique的妻子是一个关爱家人的人。

2.情节结构：作者“I”的朋友Enrique在家中遭遇毒蜘蛛Alf-spider，因为害怕选择保

持不动。

（冲突）作者“I”