高中英语教学竞赛公开课、高考复习课件：读后续写how-to-polish-your-writing.pptx

高中英语教学竞赛公开课、

高考复习课件：读后续写

how-to-polish-your-writing;;Withagianttearinhereye,thelittlegirllookedupathim.Sheforcedasmile,saying“Thankyou”andwalkedtowardsthedoor.Pappythoughtofhisdaughterandsaidtothegirlloudly,“Howmuchhaveyougottospend?”Hearingthis,thelittlegirlcountedmoneyinherpurse---twodollars.Afterthinkingforafewseconds,Pappysaid,“TodayisChristmasDayandthisisyourluckyday.Thebellcoststwodollars.”Thechildwentout,holdingthespecialbellinherhand.

;LaterthateveningwhenPappywasclosinguptheshop,heheardafamiliarringing.Hecouldn’tbelievehisears.Thegirlstoodinthedoorway,ringingthebellhappily.ThenPappygotclosetoherandasked,“Haveyouchangedyourmind,Miss?”“No.MyMommasaysthepresentisforyou.”saidthechild.BeforePappyhadtimetosayanotherword,ayoungwomanwalkedin.ShesaidtoPappy,“Hello,Dad.”;Howtopolishyourstory?;润色文章的技巧;Howtopolishyourwords?;Tip1：“小”心思——丰满人物内心;Tip1：“小”心思——丰满人物内心;Oneday,theBrother,whohadbecomeaMonk,forcedhimselfonthesameroadwherehefoundaccommodationyearsago.①Hedecidedtovisitthefamily.②Buttheshabbycottagewasnowheretobefound.Heonlyfoundasplendidhouse.③Hethoughtthefamilymightdie.Suddenly,amancameout.Themonkrecognizedhim.Itwasthefatherofthefamily.Soheasked,“Haveyoulivedhere?”;Oneday,theBrother,whohadbecomeaMonk,forcedhimselfonthesameroadwherehefoundaccommodationyearsago.①Drivenbyasenseofregret,hedecidedtovisitthefamily.②Tohisgreatsurprise,theshabbycottagewasnowheretobefound.Heonlyfoundasplendidhouse.③Uponthinkingthefamilymighthavestarvedtodeath,hesighedwithguilt.Suddenly,amancameout.Themonkrecognizedhim.Itwasthefatherofthefamily.Soheasked,“Haveyoulivedhere?”;Let’scompare！;Howtodescribeyourinnerfeelings?;;3.ThenPappygotclosetoheran