高考英语写作专题经典讲座三十一 形式的连贯.docx

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写作专题三十一形式的连贯

形式的连贯

使用转折词语进行过渡

转折词语的作用是使句子和句子、段落和段落之间更加衔接和连贯。常用的转折词语可以概括为以下四类。

一.使用代词

例子8

Itisthemosttalked-ofsubjectinourdailylife.Everyonementionsitseveraltimesaday.Youthinkaboutitatleastonceduringeveryclass.Itspassageissteady.Ittoucheseveryone.Whatisit?Itistime!

Insummer,Fatherhadhisusualtwoorthreeweeksofvacation.Thesewerenormallyspentatourcabininthemountains.

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二.重复关键词

例子9

Myfirstvisittothecinemawasaveryunhappyone.SomefriendstookmetherewhenIwassevenyearsold.AtfirsttherewerebrightlightsandmusicandIleftquitehappy.Whenthelightswentout,Ifeltafraid.ThenthefilmstartedandIsawatrainonthescreen.Thetrainwascomingtowardsme.Ishoutedoutinfearandgotdownundermyseat.Whenmyfriendsawme,theystartedtolaugh.Ifeltashamedandsatbackinmyseat.IwatchedthefilmtotheendnutIstillfeltafraid.Iwasgladwhenthefilmended.

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三.使用同义词（包括：近义词）

OfallJefferson’smanytablets,oneiscentral.Hewasaboveallagoodandtirelesswriter……histalentasanauthorwassoondiscovered.

IfirstheardthistaleinIndia……latersomeonetoldmethatthestoryappearedinamagazine.

现以下面一段文章来说明上述三种转折语的用法：

例子10

Inrockmusicthereisadistinctandalmostoverwhelmingbeat.(2)Nosinglebeatischaracteristicofthemusictoday.(3)Buteachsonghasaneasilyrecognizablerhythm.(4)Asyoulistentoasong,yourfootusuallystartstopickupthebeat.(5)Beforelong,yourentirebodyseemstobemovingwithit.(6)Yourheadpoundswiththebeat,andthereisnoroomforthought.(7)Onlythesurgeofthemusicisimportant.(8)Initsownway,rockmusicisasdominantastheRockofGibraltar.(9)Itsmessageisanoverpoweringemotionalone.

这是一段内容紧凑、条理清楚、连贯性很强的文章。作者使用了“重复关键词”，“同义词”，“代词”等形式，使全段意义自然而有机地连贯起来。第一句是全段的主题句，其中有一个关键词beat（节拍）。其后beat在2，4，6，句中重复出现，在第3，7句中分别以rhythm和surge这两个同义词和近义词出现，在第5句中则以代词it代替beat.

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四.使用转