读后续写写作讲评：一次惊险的救援，一股友情的力量--高考英语复习写作专项 .pdf

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读后续写写作讲评:一次惊险的救援，一股友情的力量

读后续写

IlivedinasmalltownandIhadthreebestfriends,Danny,Mia,andRubyWe

lovedtoplaytogetherafterschoolandourfavoritepastimewasflyingcolorfulkitesin

theopenfieldnearthelargeoaktree（橡树）.

Onesunnyaturday,wemetuptoplay.Weallhadourkitesready,beautifully

decoratedwithbrightcolorsandpatterns.Thewindwasjustright,soitwasaperfect

daytoletourkitessoar（翱翔）.Afterawhile,wedecidedtohaveacompetition一who

couldflythekitethehighest.Thefieldechoed（回响）withourjoyfullaughteraswe

eachtookturns,oureyesgleamingwithanticipation.

However,asIletmykiteflyhighupintothesky,agustofwindblewitoffcourse.

Itgottangled（使结）inthebranchesofthelargeoaktreethatstoodtallinthefield.I

wasdisappointedbutdetermined.Idecidedtoclimbthetreetorescuemykite.My

friendslookedatmenervouslyasIstartedmyclimb,thetreetoweringoverthem.

AsIclimbedhigherandhigher,theotherswatchedwithbatedbreath（屏住呼

吸）.Theywereworriedbutalsoalittleexcited.Afterall,itwasquiteanadventure

toseemeclimbingsohigh.uddenly,Ifeltsomethingwrong.Iwasstuck!Thebranch

Iwasstandingonwasslipperyandcouldntseemtomove.

Myfriendslookedatmewithwide,scaredeyes.Theydidntknowhowtohelpme.

Theyjustshoutedwordsofencouragement,assuringmethatIcoulddoit.

Itriedmybesttomove,butIwasscaredandmyheartwaspounding

hard.uddenly,Ilostmyfootingandfell!Myfriendsgaspedinshock.Fortunately,I

didntfallfromahighheight,butitwasenoughtohurtmyarmbadly.Icriedoutin

pain.MiaandRubyquicklyranovertomewhileDannyrantofetchanadultIwas

sobbing,myarmthrobbingwithpain.Myfriendsweretherebymyside,comforting

me.

Thetownspeoplesoonarrived.

Buttheyfailedtomakeme

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