高考英语复习试题：专题六第四讲　怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“活”句子要“鲜”练习含解析.docVIP

第四讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“活”，句子要“鲜”

句式单一、缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分。精彩句式的合理使用会使文章极具可读性。考生在写作时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句，并注意句式的灵活多变，让文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，让作文跨上五档线！

[写作技法指导]

一、利用复合句式，提升文章档次

(一)增加亮点的定语从句

1.定语从句的应用可以非常有效地提升表达档次，在写作中如果我们可以把两个简单句合并为一个定语从句，就是从低级到高级的表达。

①Besides,IadviseyoutogotothebookstoretoborrowahistorybookandlearnthehistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance.Itcanhelpyoubetterunderstandthepoemstobelearned.

→Besides,IadviseyoutogotothebookstoretoborrowahistorybookandlearnthehistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance，whichcanhelpyoubetterunderstandthepoemstobelearned. (2017·全国卷Ⅰ)

②Youfindsomemistakesinthem.Youcancorrectanymistakes.

→Youcancorrectanymistakesyoufindinthem. (2016·全国卷Ⅰ)

③Firstly，peoplemayfeelforcedwhenaskedtodothings.Theydon’twanttodothings.

→Firstly，peoplemayfeelforcedwhenaskedtodothingsthattheydon’twantto. (2016·江苏卷)

2．定语从句有多种形式，引导词也有若干，但最常运用、最能增加亮点的是as和which引导的非限制性定语从句以及“介词＋which”引导的定语从句。

(1)在表达“正如……”这一含义时，我们常用as引导的非限制性定语从句。常见的句式有：

①Asweallknow.../Asisknowntoall...

②Ashepointedout...

③Aswecanseefrom...

④Asthefamoussayinggoes...

Asyouknow,thesceneryalongtheYangtzeRiverisamazing,withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots. (2017·北京卷)

(2)which引导定语从句时，可以指代某个词，也可以指代整个主句。

IamwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheChinesepaper-cuttingartexhibition，whichistobeheldintheartgalleryfrom8：00amto5：00pmnextSundayinourcitycenter. (2017·全国卷Ⅱ)

(3)“介词＋which”引导的定语从句

①Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek,duringwhichweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife. (2017·北京卷)

②Itmakesnodifferencefromordinaryvotingevents,inwhichcandidatesgoaroundtoseeksupports. (2016·江苏卷)

(二)吸引眼球的状语从句

在英语写作中，状语从句是经常用到的句型，它的灵活运用使作文更具吸引力。

①Severaldayslater,whenthevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony,itwaswellreceived. (2017·北京卷)

②Tobeginwith,thefinalexamofthistermisaroundthecorn