2025届高考英语复习读后续写：成长故事 课件（共19张PPT）.pptx

高考英语读后续写语篇练习遛狗风波：家庭合作的成长故事1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文WhenIwasakid,myparentsandIlivedneartheforest.Theyoftentoldmethatourfamilywasateamthatneededtoworktogetherforthehouseholdtofunctionsmoothly.Therewasalwaysanabundanceofworktodo—cooking,cleaning,andwalkingdogs.Ivolunteeredtowalkourdog,Max,whohadbeenadoptedonemonthbefore.Ineverdaredletthisgiantdogoffthelead(牵狗绳),justincasehetookoff.Onemorning,wewerewalkingalongintheforestwhenMaxstartedpullingonthelead.Atfirst,Iwasabletoholdondespitethewetgroundfromarecentshower.ButthemoreItriedtostophimpulling,themoreitturnedintoatugofwar.Andthankstotheslipperyground,Ilost.Pullinghislead,Maxshotofflikeabullet,leavingmescreamingbehind.Ichasedhimbutlostmyfootingandfellface-firstintosomemud.Istumbled(踉跄)tomyfeet,butlookingahead,Ifoundhimrunningbacktowardsme.Ithoughthewasgoingtostopandgivemehis“Sorry”look.Butinstead,thedogshotpastmeandreturnedafterawhile.4

续写原文Assoonaswegothome,mymotherimmediatelyattendedtoMaxwithawarmtowelandadoggytreat.Ithoughtseeingmestumblingandcoveredinmud,Iwouldalsogetawarmcupofteaandamotherlykiss.Instead,Igotaveryloudlectureaboutlettingthedoglooseintheforest.Ifeltfrustrated.Itwasn’tfairthatshedidn’tunderstandhowdifficultitwastocontrolMax.Ifoughtback,“Stoplecturingme!Whyiseverythingmyfault?”Withthesewords,Istormedintomybedroomandslammedthedoorshut.Intheevening,IheardmymothercallMaxandtakehimout.Itwasn’tlongbeforeIheardmymotherscreamingandthedooropeningagain.5

段首句Paragraph1：Iwalkedoutofmyroom.Paragraph2:Dadsteppedin,suggestingthatweworktogethertotrainMax.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8文章讲述了小时候，“我”和父母住在森林附近，“我”负责遛狗。一次在森林里，狗狗Max突然挣脱牵引绳狂奔，“我”摔倒在泥里，回家后妈妈不仅没安慰“我”，反而大声指责。“我”委屈地