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五成篇(连句成篇，规范书写)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________子主题2人际沟通玲玲给《新标准》杂志的Diana写了一封信，在信中诉说了她的烦恼，想请Diana给她提点建议。假如你是Diana，请根据信件内容和建议要点提示，用英语给她写一封回信。词数80～100。DearDiana，WiththePEexamdrawingnear，Ifeelalotofpressure.Lastweekend，myparentssentmetoanafter－schoolPEclass.TheythinkitistheonlywaytoimprovemyPE.ButIamsotiredthatImafraidIcantcontinuewiththetraininganymore.WhatshouldIdo？Writetomesoon.Yours，Lingling一审(审主题、文体、人称、时态等)主题文体人称时态__________________________________________亲子关系应用文第一人称一般现在时二圈(圈题眼)三分段(列框架)四升格(修改润色)连句成篇初体验DearLingling，①Iamsorrytohearthatyouaresotiredbecauseyourparentsgiveyoutoomuchpressure.Idliketogiveyousomeadvice.Ontheonehand，youdbettercommunicatewithyourparentswhentheyrefreeandshareyourfeelingswiththem.②Theymayunderstandyoursituationandstopgivingyoualotofpressure.③Ontheotherhand，youshouldlistthewaysofimprovingPEgrades.Forexample，youcouldpromisetogetupearlytopractiserunningeveryday.Imsuretheywilltakeyouropinionintoconsideration.Hopethingsworkout.Yours，Diana句式升格再挑战①用becauseof短语升格___________________________________________________________________________________________________②用pushsb.结构升格_______________________________________________________________③用besupposedtodosth.结构升格__________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamsorrytohearthatyouaresotiredbecauseoftoomuchpressuregivenbyyourparents.Theymayunderstandyoursituationandstoppushingyoutoohard.Ontheotherhand，youaresupposed