大学英语四级应用文写作.ppt

meals.⑺Isuggestthattherebesomesoftmusictokeepusrelaxedandcalm.⑻Honestlyspeaking,thecanteenworkersarefriendlyandhospitable.⑼Butthereisstillmuchroomforimprovement.⑽Thesesuggestionsarenotjustofmyown,butalsoofmanyotherstudents.⑾Wedohopeourrespectedpresidentwilltakeoutadvice.⑿Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.Yoursrespectfully,LiMing(158words)框架点评第一段：告知对方自己的身份，并点明写信的目的是投诉本校食堂的服务。第二段：用Tostartwith…,What’smore…和Finally…引出对饭菜质量、价格和就餐环境的投诉；并用Honestlyspeaking…指出食堂做得好的方面，即“餐厅的工作人员热情友好”。需要注意的是，文中所提出的“质量、价格、就餐环境和服务”这几点都是提纲中所给出的，这样就避免了跑题或漏点的情况。第三段：说明意见来源，并提出希望，最后用书信套语“您费心了，十分感谢”结束全文。可以看出，这封信语体较正式，措辞礼貌、委婉，运用了一些如Iventuretowriteyoualetter,wedohopeourrespectedpresidentwill…之类的语句，符合写信人的身份。范文点评二ALettertotheUniversityPresidentAbouttheCanteenServiceonCampusJanuary12th,2002DearMr.President,⑴MynameisLiMing,fromtheDepartmentofForeignLanguages.⑵Iventuretowriteyoualetteraboutthecanteenserviceoncampusonbehalfofthestudentsinourclass.⑶Tostartwith,ourcanteenshouldprovidemorekindsofdishes.⑷Asyouknow,studentscomefromvariousplacesandtheymaynotbeaccustomedtothelocalfood.⑸What’smore,thepriceishigherthanwecanafford.⑹Wehopeitcanbedecreasedalittle.⑺Finally,moreseatsareneeded.⑻Thecanteenisexeremelycrowdedatlunchtimeandtolookforaseathasbecomeaheadacheformanystudents.⑼Moreseatswillsaveusmuchtrouble.⑽Honestolyspeaking,thecanteenstaffarepatientandwell-mannered.⑾Butthereisstillmuchroomforimprovement.⑿Wewillappreciateitifyoutakesomemeasurestoimprovethecanteenservice.⒀Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.