读后续写：布拉克斯顿柠檬水摊故事 讲义 高三英语上学期一模英语试题.docxVIP

读后续写

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Peoplesaythereseemstobesomuchnegativityinthisworld,buttherearegoodpeopleoutthereandsometimeswearemadeawareofthemwhenweleastexpectit.

Myfamilyhadbeenplanningayardsaleforseveralweeks.Ourfive-year-oldson,Braxton,askedifhecouldsetupalemonade(柠檬水)standduringtheyardsale.HewantedtomakealittlemoneyandsaveuptobuyasetofLegobricks,whichmightaddupto$100.“Iwillearnitmyself!”hedeclaredproudly.Hehadbeentalkingaboutitalmostnon-stopandcouldn’twaitforthedaytofinallyarrive.

Twodaysago,weputupthesign“YardSale”infrontofthedriveway,tellingneighborsaboutthetimeanditems.Ontheveryday,Braxtonwokeupearlyat6:00amandcouldn’thidehisexcitement.Aftersettingeverythingoutfortheyardsale,hemadethelemonadeandbakedsomecookiestobeginhisbusinessadventure.

Afteraboutanhourormore,wehadseveralcustomers,butBraxtonstillhadnotsoldanylemonade.Hewasalittlesad.Thenayoungwomanwalkedupwithherbabytobrowsetheitems.Whilemakingsmalltalk,wetoldheraboutBraxton’splantosavehismoneyforhislittledream.Shethenselectedacoupleofbabytoysforjust$6andpaidwitha$10bill.“Keepthechange,boy!”shesaidgently.Braxtonofferedtogiveherthelemonadeandcookieshemade.Hecouldn’thavebeenhappiertoreceivehisfirstlittlebitofmoneyfortheday.

Thewomanleftwiththebabytoys,thelemonadeandsomecookies.Wedidn’tgiveitmuchthoughtafterthat,butthestorydidn’tendthere.

注意：

（1）续写词数应为150个左右；

（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Severalminutespassedandthewomanreturned.

Holdingtheenvelopeandthebill,weweresomoved.

布拉克斯顿柠檬水摊故事续写

续写分析（两段）?

第一段：开篇女士的再次出现，打破了故事原本的节奏，瞬间抓住读者注意力。“smiling”和“holdinganenvelope”的细节描写，营造出神秘又温暖的氛围，暗示她此番回来带有重要目的。女士的话语直白地展现出她对Braxton梦想的在意，这是她善