2025届浙江省高考英语二轮复习：读后续写写作策略+课件.pptx

Problem-solution模式

在读后续写情节创建中的运用;Designtheplot(情节创建)

Connectdifferentpartslogically(逻辑连贯)

Vivifythedescription(细节描写);读后续写评分依据:

与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；

上下文的连贯性。

内容的丰富性

应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；

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Nineyearsago,IwasthedirectorofoperationsataconsumerproductscompanyinSanFrancisco.OneFridayafternoon,Iwascalledintoameetingthatwasalreadyinprogress,whichturnedouttobemyexitinterview.Iwasfiredalongwithseveralothers.Iwas64yearsoldatthetime.Itwasn’tcompletelyunexpected.Isignedapileofpapers,gatheredmypersonalbelongings,andlefttojoinmywifewhowaswaitingformeatanearbyrestaurant.Fast-forwardseveralhours,webothgotdrunk.

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So,40plusyearsofcontinuousemploymentforvariouscompanieswasover.Ihadagoodnetwork,agoodreputation—IthoughtI’dbejustfine.Iwasanengineerinmanufacturingandpackaging.Ihadagoodbackground.Retirementwassimplynotanoptionforme.

;Andthenanideabegantotakeroot,bornfrommyconcernforourenvironment.Iwantedtobuildmyownbusiness,designingandmanufacturingbiodegradablepackagingfromwaste.Thisiscalledcleantechnology,anditfeltreallymeaningfultome.Sonowattheageof66,with40yearsofexperience,Ibecameanentrepreneurfortheveryfirsttime.;Byhandlingissueslikemanufacturing,patents,partnerships,funding,etc,Iwasonthetracksoon.Fiveyearslater,ourprofitshavedoubledeveryyear,andwehavenodebt.RightnowI’mdoingthemostrewardingandmeaningfulworkofmylife.TheCensusBureausaysthatby2050,therewillbe84millionseniorsinthiscountry.That’sanamazingnumber.That’salmosttwiceasmanyaswehavetoday.Canyouimaginehowmanyfirsttimeentrepreneurstherewillbeamong84millionpeople?Andtheywillallhavefourdecadesofexperience.;

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