2026届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写连贯性 课件.pptxVIP

Coherenceincontinuationwriting读后续写之呼应连贯

Criteria评分标准第五档（21-25分）第四档（16-20分）完全达到了预期的写作目的。●与所给短文融合度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理；●内容丰富，故事发展合理、逻辑性强，续写完整，符合写作目的与情境；●所使用语法结构和词汇多样、准确和恰当，可能有个别错误，但完全不影响意义表达；●有效地使用了语句间的连接手段，结构清晰，意义连贯。达到了预期的写作目的。与所给短文融合度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理；内容比较丰富，故事发展比较合理、有逻辑性，续写比较完整，比较符合写作目的与情境；所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达；比较有效地使用了语句间的连接手段，结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯

ReadandanalyzeElementswhenwherewhowhatwhyhowat6am.onMother’sDayplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridgethetwins,father,motherkitchen,parens’bedroombymakingbreakfastwiththehelpoffathertogivemotherasurpriseonMother’sDay

PlotdevelopmentPara.1:Background/settingthetwinsplannedtomakebreakfasttogivemotherasurpriseonMother’sDayPara.2:Risingactiontheprocessofthetwins’makingeFrenchtoastandchickenporridgebythemselvesPara.3:Climax(conflict)theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire;thestovewasamess;Jeff’shandgotburnt,thepieceofbreadturnedblack.Para.4:Fallingaction...theirfatherappeared....Para.5:ResolutionThetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

EmotioalchangesAsurpriseformotherpanicked,disappointed?Themeexcited,confidentfamilylovefather?mother?Thetwins

GivensentencesPredictionPara1Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Para2Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.逆向推理问答策略Q1:WhatwasFather’sfirstreactionwhenfacedwiththemess?Q2:Howdidthetwinsexplaintheirplantotheirfather?Q3:Whatdidthefatherdo?Q1:WhatwasMother’sfirstreactionwhenthetwinswokeherup?Q2:HowdidthetwinsexpresstheirloveandbestwishestoMother?Q3:HowdidMotherfeel?Howcanyoumaketheendingmoreappealingandmeaningful?

PlotandthinkHowdoyoumakethecontinuationwritingcoherent?捕捉原文伏笔--前后呼应，形成亮点人物性格的前后一致段首句关联方式--主位推进，语义连贯

前后呼应形成亮点捕捉原文伏笔--前后呼应形成亮点AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISE①...Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherint