人教版八年级下册英语精品教学课件 Unit 9 写作能力提升练 (4).pptVIP

**写作任务写作实践UNIT9Haveyoueverbeentoamuseum?写作能力提升练你到过什么地方？你对它有什么深刻的印象？请用英语写一篇短文来介绍你游历过的城市或风景名胜。词数不少于70。［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语完成句子。1.哈尔滨位于中国黑龙江省的南部。它是一座历史悠久的美丽城市。Harbinis______________________________________.Itisabeautifulcity__________________________.inthesouthofHeilongjiangProvince,Chinawithalonghistory2.这里冬天的天气非常寒冷，但是夏天并不热。Theweatherhereis____________________,butitis_______________________.3.太阳岛是夏天避暑的好地方，松花江是游泳或划船的好地方。TheSunIslandisagreatplace______________________insummer.TheSonghuaRiverisagreatplace____________________.verycoldinwinternothotinsummertogetawayfromtheheattoswimorgoboating［连句成篇］HaveyoueverbeentoHarbin?HarbinisinthesouthofHeilongjiangProvince,China.It’sabeautifulcitywithalonghistory.Theweatherhereisverycoldinwinter,butit’snothotinsummer.Therearemanyplacesofinterest.TheSunIslandisagreatplacetogetawayfromtheheatinsummer.TheSonghuaRiverisyourbestchoicetoswimorgoboating.Ifyoucomehereinwinter,youcanseeallkindsofbeautifulicecarvings.Ifyouwouldliketogoskiing,youcangotoYabuliSkiResort.IthasthelongestalpineskiruninAsia.Harbinisagoodplaceforatrip.I’msureyouwillfallinlovewithit.高分点评:1.思路清晰，采用了三段式的结构。2.灵活运用inthesouthof,placesofinterest,getawayfrom,allkindsof等短语详细介绍了哈尔滨的地理位置、天气和名胜，显示了作者扎实的基本功。3.使用宾语从句、if引导的条件状语从句，使全文句式丰富。beautiful,cleanandquietTimelastweekPlacetheWestLakeActivitiesgosightseeingtakearideontheboatclimbthemountainComments（评价）beautiful,cleanandquietDearAndy，____________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua要求:1.恰当运用现在完成时；2.不少于70词。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________