人教版九年级下册英语精品教学课件 UNIT 12 创新表达—写作能力提升练.pptVIP

**写作任务思路点拨写作实践UNIT12Lifeisfulloftheunexpected.创新表达—写作能力提升练请你以“MyLuckyDay”为题，写一篇英语短文，讲述你经历过的幸运的一天，讲讲那天发生了什么事情。［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语完成句子。1.我叔叔说他可以捎我一程。 Myunclesaidthat__________________________.2.我意识到我把钱包忘在家里了，我不能买午餐。 Irealizedthat______________________________ andthatIcouldn’tbuylunch.hecouldgivemealiftIhadleftmywalletathome3.我最好的朋友李华马上借给我一些钱。 MybestfriendLiHua______________________________.4.老师表扬我，因为我英语考试取得最高分。 I________________________________becauseI ________________________intheEnglishexam.lentmesomemoneyatoncewaspraisedbymyteachergotthehighestscore［连句成篇］MyLuckyDayIwillalwaysrememberthedateSeptember14th,2024.Thatwastheluckiestdayofmylife.WhenIwokeupthatmorning,itwasraining.Iwasabouttogotothebusstationtotakethebustoschoolwhenmyunclecalledmeup.Hesaidthathecouldgivemealift.Laterthatday,IrealizedthatIhadleftmywalletathomeandthatIcouldn’tbuylunch.MybestfriendLiHualentmesomemoneyatonce.Afterthat,IwaspraisedbymyteacherbecauseIgotthehighestscoreintheEnglishexam.Icouldn’tbelievethatIdidsowell,andneithercouldmyparents.Thatnighttheyweresohappythattheypromisedtobuyanewbikeformeasaprize.Whataluckyday!高分点评:1.思路清晰，采用三段式结构。2.文中运用时间状语从句、宾语从句、结果状语从句、感叹句为作文增彩。3.准确运用短语，比如：beaboutto，givesb.alift，laterthatday，afterthat，使文章流畅，句式丰富。回家取的路上被电动车撞伤SomethingunexpectedResults父母很早出门上班睡过头了到公共汽车站时车已经开走了上学迟到忘带家庭作业回家取的路上被电动车撞伤提示词汇:fetch去取来；electricbicycle电动车；haveapaininmyarm(s)胳膊疼Todaywasareallyunluckydayforme.Istayeduplatelastnightbecauseofanexcitingsoccermatch.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________