人教版九年级下册英语精品教学课件 UnIT 1 写作能力提升练.pptVIP

UNIT1写作能力提升练

请根据下列图片及提示信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍并呼吁同学们保护珍稀动物—中国大鲵(Chinesegiantsalamander)。词数70~90。

参考词汇：limb肢 onland在陆地上Doyouknowtheanimalinthepicture?ItistheChinesegiantsalamander.______________________________________________________________________________________________

［审题指导］1.体裁：说明文2.话题：介绍珍稀动物—中国大鲵3.人称：以第三人称为主4.时态：一般现在时

［思路构建］

Doyouknowtheanimalinthepicture?ItistheChinesegiantsalamander.PeoplealsocallitwawayuinChinese.Itisusuallyblackorbrown.Withsmalleyes,abigmouthandfourlimbs,itlookscuteandquiet.TheChinesegiantsalamandercanlivebothinwaterandonland.Itsleepsinthedayandgoesoutatnighttolookforfood.Thesmallanimalsinwaterareitsfavourites.Therearen’tmanyChinesegiantsalamandersinChinanowandtheyareindanger.Let’ssavethem.［精彩范文］

1.思路清晰，采用“总—分—总”三段式结构；2.blackorbrown,both...and...,onland,intheday,goout,atnight,lookfor等短语的正确运用，展示了作者的扎实的基本功；3.文中Therebe结构以及Let’s...祈使句运用成为文章的加分点。高分点评：

下面句子均有1-3处错误，请找出并写出正确的句子。ItistheMonkeyKingandpeoplecallitSunWukongwithChinese.___________________________________________________________________ItistheMonkeyKingandpeoplecallitSunWukonginChinese.

2.Havesmalleyes,abigmouthandabignose,mysisterlookscute. _____________________________________________________________________3.Thetigersleepinthedayandgooutatnightlookforfood. ______________________________________________________________________Withsmalleyes,abigmouthandabignose,mysisterlookscute.Thetigersleepsinthedayandgoesoutatnighttolookforfood.

4.Therehaven’tmanypandasinSichuan,China. _____________________________________________5.Thepandasareinadangernow. _____________________________________________TherearentmanypandasinSichuan,China.Thepandasareindangernow.

动物是人类的朋友。地球上的动物有的美丽，有的可爱，有的活泼，有的腼腆……请写—篇英语短文介绍你最喜欢的动物，并在班级的主题班会上和大家分享。要点：

要求：词数60左右,题