人教版九年级下册英语精品教学课件 UNIT 12 写作能力提升练 (7).pptVIP

**人教宁夏九年级下册写作任务思路点拨写作实践UNIT12Lifeisfulloftheunexpected.写作能力提升练请你以“MyLuckyDay”为题，写一篇英语短文，记述你经历过的幸运的一天，讲讲那天发生了什么事情。词数80左右。［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语完成句子。1.他说他可以捎我一程。Hesaid_______________________.2.我意识到我把钱包忘在家里了，我不能买午餐。Irealized_________________________andIcouldn’tbuylunch.3.我最好的朋友李华马上借给我一些钱。MybestfriendLiHua____________________________.hecouldgivemealiftIhadleftmywalletathomelentmesomemoneyatonce4.因为我英语考试取得最高分我的老师表扬我。I________________________becauseI_________________intheEnglishexam.5.他们非常高兴以至于他们答应给我买一辆新自行车作为奖励。Theyweresohappythatthey___________________________asaprize.waspraisedbymyteachergotthehighestscorepromisedtobuyanewbikeforme［连句成篇］MyLuckyDayIwillalwaysrememberthedateSeptember14th,2021.Thatwastheluckiestdayofmylife.WhenIwokeupthatmorning,itwasraining.Iwasabouttogotothebusstationtotakethebustoschoolwhenmyunclecalledmeup.Hesaidhecouldgivemealift.Laterthatday,IrealizedIhadleftmywalletathomeandIcouldn’tbuylunch.MybestfriendLiHualentmesomemoneyatonce.Afterthat,IwaspraisedbymyteacherbecauseIgotthehighestscoreintheEnglishexam.Icouldn’tbelievethatIdidsowell,andneithercouldmyparents.Thatnighttheyweresohappythattheypromisedtobuyanewbikeformeasaprize.Whataluckyday!高分点评：1.思路清晰，采用“总—分—总”三段式结构。2.thatmorning,laterthatday,afterthat,thatnight的使用使文章结构更加清晰，层次更加分明。3.wakeup,beaboutto,givesb.alift等短语的正确运用，展示出了作者良好的英语功底。4.感叹句、时间状语从句、宾语从句以及so...that句型的运用增加了文章的文采。下面图画讲述了Jim和Jack去野餐的故事。请根据图画内容和提示词语，以“AnUnluckyDay”为题写一篇英语短文，为大家讲述这个小故事。词数80左右。注意：问号部分可根据其他图画内容合理想象。提示词：preparefor,take...out,rushtowards___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________